Goodness gracious this was an intense chapter. The detail you poured into the Tyson death scene was close to excruciating, but in a really good good way. I love the interactions with Angela and Cancer more than anyone else. Its not even that Cancer is neccessarily the one I want to know the most about, its that they fit, in a wierd.. non fitting way. I just really like reading scenes about them.

I think Im starting to put some idea of whats going to happen together in my head, but i dont want to say anything because Ive been so wrong so far... But im scared that this plan that Scythe and Raythe and Cancer have against Angela... that.. it might turn out like with your last story. Where (goodness if i forgot names forgive me) Jason really did like Siohban.. honestly, but not enough. Im scared thats how Cancer is going to be with Angela.

I totally understand that you dont do.. happy ending romance stories, but.. it would be nice if. i dont know, anyways. I adored this chapter, really got me thinking and it was an amazing progression. Good addition to put in such a scene with Cancer especially with the little reaction that showed after he kissed her.

Good Good Good. As always, I cant wait for more!

Eew. Who bites ears? They have gooey earwax in them.

Cancer and Scythe are weird. Angela is weird. Hell-frozen, the whole PLOT is weird. But then again, that's just me. And what happened to the Predator, Consumer, and all those beings? Did they poof, or shall we forget them for right now?

Eh. I'm talking too much. Happy Easter. :)

-Mellowdy

ooh, wow. speechless i say, completely speechless...actaully no. im not there yet. but it was a great chapter. quite entertaining. really. well, im off! my brother wants to go to and at the moment is breathing down my neck. so toodles! until next time!

Man I really wish I had discovered this story once it was finished cause waiting for chapters is going to be excruciating. I will even go so far to say this is on par with Web of Lies (if you have not read that story it's a complement).

I have to say I feel so sorry for Angle cause it really is looking like so much of her life is a lie and her best friend out right hates her and always has. (im guessing something happened when they were little and he has held a grudge all this time waiting to destroy her?) Which is sad cause Scythe was a great character and I was enjoying him as a romantic lead, guess that honor is really cancers as it stands now though.

In the end though all things are pointing to some nasty stuff going down and a happy ending all but unlikely (I can still hope though). I really just want to hug Angle and im happy some one is cluing her in even they wont just out right tell her (some how I bet she would not believe him if he did. I hope someone in the end will actually care about Angle and more then any of the other stuff going on. I also hope she dose not let Scythe or Rayth in a ten foot radius of her (probably shouldn’t let Cancer either) but I guess there would not be a story if she had the sense to do that.

hehe me again!

this chapter totally creeped me out..tyson impaled by his own car? seriously, that was the creepiest.

SCYTHE has started to creep me out.

ahg...cancer was totally hot though. angela should end up with cancer...

and scythe...?

well, he can be stuck with lynn..!

hahahhahaha...

okay, ill stop.

grreat chapter, update soon (thanks a lot for the super-quick update, btw).

cute

Twisted, dark ... brilliant. That's what this is. I can't explain how addicted i have become to this story. Your updates, once i am alerted of them, make me twitch with anticipation, squeal with joy at the simple, little update confirmation in my hotmail account.

You're too good at this, and for that, i will be eternally envious of you. I still haven't posted anything on this site. Perhaps because i am afraid of the response - or lack thereof - that i will receive :(

But whatever, back to Predator. If i was Angela, i think i would have just broke down from seeing such a horrific scene. That was a horrible way for Tyson to die. Scythe is rather twisted, i think lol. And Rayth ... aww well. I thought he was so innocent; still like him though. He's still enticingly mysterious. But i have to say, as most people probably already have, that Cancer is undoubtedly my favourite. The mansluts are usually just too irresistable lol. That's why they get away with being mansluts ...

Anyhow. Terrific chapter, i hope you update soon.

Okay. So my theory is that Scythe is getting revenge on Angela for whatever she did when they were kids (his dad offering her a cookie and all). And that all the boys have conspired to get Angela to be "unholy". They want her to break those rules ("Thou shall not murder", etc.)

And she was definitley kissing Cancer that night! It has to be him. Stupid Cancer. Playing dumb.

Oh. Yeah, this was one freaky chapter. Tyson getting IMPALED by his own car. Creepy.

i just have one thing to say:

"you sick creepy child!"

that was so creepy!

how does your mind think of these things?

don't answer that. i don't want to know

you've thoroughly scared me.

i fear for angela's life.

everyone's out to get her

and i have no idea why.

it's creepy.

but i shall keep reading.

because there is something wrong with me.

izzie

I'm still trying to figure out who the predator is although i think i have an inkling. Hm. I want to trust Cancer but i really can't. Ah this is absolutely mind boggling. I like this story alot so far. Update soon.

So Tyson did die? What they did to him was so messed up. This was another GRREEAT chapter update soon! ]

will you hurry up & finish this so your other ones finish so i can finish my other ones? they're getting mad because i keep changing my mind. but i'm not changing my mind! if what you're doing isn't working, dear, reverse. as always. reverse.

*shudders* dude, you write some of the scariest stuff I've read. This chapter shows a part of Scythe that didn't surprise me, because as readers we notice things about the characters that the characters themselves don't. Things're starting to get freaky; me likes :) I don't think I like Scythe so much anymore, but don't tell him I said that!

omg, WHY is she such an idiot?

sup. sup. bet you weren't expecting to ever see me again. because i'm an enigma.

but here i am.

vrum.

you forgot to give me an author's note response k. i did write a review, you know. it's what i call a "ghost review". you should have KNOWN what i had to say about chapter 12. jeez.

but since you don't know me like that, i'll tell you what i thought. i didnt think this would be necessary but SIGH.

for one i loved the scene with the stained glass, and the boy going all, "ASK THEM. ask them about eleanor and what they were doing on the day it rained lethal cages." she didn't ask them, btw. make her do that. i demand, because i am interested to see if they go all, "huhwhatnothing. i was having a bath with my squeeze toy. you got beef?" and yeah.

i like squeeze toys. could i borrow scythe's? it's about time he's grown out of it. goawssh.

moving on.

the scene with cancer and the piano and his ex VS angela and the clothes was quite saddening. cancer's all, "ruff" and angel's all, "plz forgive. plz." im listening to a song called "forgiven" so it's fate, hey?

now onto chapter 13.

anthony the ant eater. hehe. and he kills ants. leon the lion. herbert (is that is name?) the herbivore. so maybe rayth is the good guy. maybes. -connect-

anywho.

i like how the little boy shoved angel in the old shack place. and how hes trying to help her, and she's all, "huff".

" 'Think of me as your guide,' he said." i think you mean "bride" there. jeez. i know your story better than you do.

the list was like this: wtf.

mwahaha. one of them is going to betray. the dude. who was all. "revenge plz". rayth. -assumption of all assumptions-

"Calm down." OH PSH. easy for him to say. -hair flip-

it's kind of weird how rayth found her in the morning and wasn't like, "so... nice day for sleeping in the middle of nowhere eh eh?"

she was probably kissing rayth.

poor wittle tyson-poo. being stalked by two different peeps.

THEY'RE GONNA DRESS TYSON UP IN DRAG AREN'T THEY. -woe-

erhh. what the crap did mr. BUTCHA make angel doo exactly. other than random shiat!

-goes up in smoke-