Well now. ~That~ was certainly interesting! I'm quite curious now. There's something bizarre about that first chapter, and there's nothing I like more than a bizarre fic. _

Reading on...

I just found it weird that Angela is so...detached. Like I said she's like a floating zombie o.0 i don't feel anything from her. it's like ok i just kissed a stranger i found out horrible stuff but then she totally forgets it the next day? It's as if it never happened at all.

And she doesn't even tell her closest friends anything...it's just a proof of the point above. but like you said it might just be her personality

Or maybe I'm just weird -.-

NO...CANCER T.T Sigh. You sure love making the hottest guys the bad-dest.

aww...i've started to love the little boy...

what are they gonna do to tyson? :(

what was up with ?

too many questions, i can't wait to see what this is all about!

Sorry 'bout not reviewing right away, I was off on a school trip. :) Scythe would've had lotsa fun, I'm sure, especially on the Tower of Terror and California Screamin'. Can't wait for the next chapter! I don't have any chocolate for Scythe right now. What about rock candy?

What the hell... These boys are driving me crazy.. What do they have against Angela? It seems that she never did anything wrong to them. God, they were supposedly friend's since they were we lil youngins'. Why would they need to get back at her?Raythe and Scythe must have popped out of the womb psychotic. Plus I just realized that those were their nicknames forever. What kind of 8 year olds come up with nicknames like that? I always had a feeling bones was bad. It makes me wonder why goody goody Angela even has anything to do with it, and why she would start it. This story has me so confused, I can't wait until it starts moving a bit faster. Usually my attention span doesn't last this long... Oh Angela you are getting a smack for kissing a guy you weren't sure of who he was. If I was Angela I'd be asking questions and making a stand .. The girl's digging herself into trouble with a bunch of crazys. So did she end up sleeping outside, on the ground, in the rain? God,you are a brilliant writer. Update soon.

this story is amazing! can't wait for the next chapter!

Is it.. a race to see who can kill Angela first? But that doesn't make sense because theyve had plenty of opportunities to just.. kill her. AND why wasn't there more of a deal made out about her making out with Cancer and then her being knocked out. How did she get to be with raythe? it feels like there is a whole part of the chapter missing.

But still as good as ever, one of the best suspenses ive read.. but all of yours are like that.

Lovely!

scythe is funnay. he is such a funny character. he is. is he a murdered now? is he. IS HE. will he teach tyson a lesson about not being a snitch? i hope so. i dearly hope so. oh yeah, i also hope whatsherface jumps out and saves tyson all heroically. you know.

oh and there wasn't much cancer and that was a bit disappointing. but just a tad bit. he is okay now. i am not as in lust with him as i thought i was. you see, now i'm ...

TEAM RAYTH! -pompoms-

see. SEE. see how much i love rayth. HE gets pompoms. CANCER didn't. cancer is just another hojob ok. she can be crazy about him but then in the end DUN DUN DUN, RAYTH! hip, hip, HOORAY. kind of like. kind of like, THREE CHEERS FOR RAYTH! all pep rallied out and shit. all gungho. you know how we do. -black-

okokok. the predator and his booncompanions all need to just come out into the open now. they should. they just should. it would be like cake. cake, candy and ice cream.

& i thought they were wolves, you stupd khara. you paagal. I THOUGHT THEY WERE WOLVES. i thought scythe was a wofl. -drama. well i guess not. I GUESS NOT.

im cold. my mommas watching some hindi film like the big chink she is. -laffs mom- im sorry. im evil. & i hope you get a stupdendous haircut and dye your hair puke green. so then we can be jolly friends together.

we could. we just could.

Eh! Cancer and Angela sitting in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G. Making out in the rain. This story is so confusing like ffgjhytyugh. Anyway...I have me theories but they're all probably wrong so I'm going to keep them to myself. But update quicker next time! I was so excited when I found out it had been updated. Forget about Her Ashes and Euphoria. Concentrate on Predator. Concentrate! Pweety pwease. This is my favorite story on fictionpress.

Gosh. Seriously, though. I lovelovelove it.

And Cancer is hawt.

You can eat anything if you put your mind to it.

Ah,that's devotion and dedication.

Love is in the air..or not. Hm...that might be death. 0.o.

And I'm sure no one would enjoy a stick up their ass unless...well..you get the idea.

Err...hopefully it wouldn't be erotic...only painful.

Cancer that jerk. He did make out with her,right?

Arghh..she only said his name, you didn't exactly confirm it. Well, unless I missed it. Which is predictable of me.

Hmm...I'm just following this story around like a clueless puppy cause I have no clue what's going on and I probably won't get it even after you explain it in the end...so I might as well keep my mouth shut and just read. Like Angela should be doing with the little boy. Except she should be doing what he says...in a non-sexual way. Okay...am I the only one who was thinking that way?

Damn. That's what happens when I read stories with perverted little boys (you know the one,duh)

I think. Wait. Fuck...that might be a different person. Sorry. I'm just demented like that.

Err...unless you are the co-author, because then I wouldn't be sounding so idiotic...okay I'll just stop now.

Why can't they play normal games like hide and seek? And not mutate poor little animals...and people.

Grr. My mind. It's messed with...damn you tricky authors. Tricks are for kids.

Okay. Update soon...with a simple explanation for me to understand. Like one syllabel...

Okay bye,

-Avey

oh. finally some action.

no. wait. my tongue wont go icky cuz i'll get mouthwash in a bottle with a bendy straw. that way i can review and have icy, cool, minty breath. oh problem solved! Yay!

keep updating

... Well, that was a slightly baffling and weird chapter. At least, to me it was. (taps chin thoughtfully)

-Mellowdy

wow.

talk about messed up children.

and oh

a cookie?

well, i guess i'll survive

)

creepy, creepy children.

please tell me this is all fiction.

i'd be scared to leave the house if you said people like this actually existed. (in any country)

can't wait for more

even though majority of it makes no sense to me.

and...are they going to play 'bones' with him?

now i'm curious as to what bones is..

if its so illegal

creepy

izzie

So I don't think I ever reviewed here! I'm one of those evil lurkers!

Anyway I've been checking like every two days in my cycle o' stories and waiting for you to update, so I'm excited about chapter 13! I haven't read it yet(which is why I'm reviewing for ch.12), but it's bookmarked on my PSP for when I settled down and read this evening. (PSP Fictionpress unlimited reading in bed.)

So yeah, this story...intimidates me! As in, it's confusing and you intentionally are totally not telling us things as they're happening. I honestly remember trying to start this story 'cause it "sounded pretty good" on three seperate occasions, but getting annoyed at the slowly-revealing plot. I think I only kept coming back to this because I was like, "Well over-my-head writing means good writing, right? So I'll be lame if I don't keep reading and seeing where this goes." So yes, fourth-or-so readthrough, I was hooked. The later chapters are really pretty cool.

Oh, and I love these last few chapters because we got to see more of poor confused Angel when she's not being false. I'm hoping we'll find out about bones in ch.13, if you pick up right where you left off?

Anyway, I'm liking this story, but egads, dangle some more info for the readers, please! Something's gotta keep luring us in a little more. Hehe, I have a feeling I'd like this much more if I bought it all as a book, where I could say to myself, "Well at least I know the ending's there, right in the pages." Of course, then I'd skip to the end. Ar, this be a blessing, and a curse! Keep going, anyway! (What a disjointed review. Summary: hugs and love for the story, but I'm dying for some questions to be answered, instead of the questions just bringing their other question friends over to play.)

AMAZING.

I just spent the past two hours reading this.

So. so. good.

Though Angela is so naive! I want to knock some sense into her. Why won't she listen to the little boy, it's OBVIOUS that he's helping her!