my toes? hmm i s'pose i could do that. but first i have to work on my flexibility on lifting my legs over the keyboard...and one and two and *pants*...i CANT! oh such difficulty! my legs burn at such a hard task! ah i guess i shall go back to my ordinary fingers. so about this chapter...steve is getting annoying. sirosaly (my cousin's word for seriously) i mean, cancer's at least creepy in a friendly rapist way...ok that sounded wrong. but what if cancer is the villian? GASP! no i like cancer/lioness/whatever his real name is.

wowe. i love how long your chapters are. this story is pretty witty creepy. when he said "what if there is no later?" is there a double meaning? is he warnign that scythe is dangerous? update son!

Oh. (sniffs air) Do I smell jealousy of some sort?

...You giggle alot. :P

-Mellowdy

yay! cancer saved her! my sexy knight in shining armor with a twist of enjoying sadistic things. I love him. hehe. abhor! I love that word! it just sounds...very, I abhor you! I haven't used it properly in use before, but someday, when I have the chance, I will say it to someone. heh, my goal. I feel bad for cancer though, after he saved her, she automatically asked if scythe was ok. gr. huh...angela is a little forgetful, heh, there was that guy that had tried to kill her that seemed like he was raythe, but I guess he's not then? wah why is scythe always hurting her? just...emotionally, poo, she doesn't deserve it. I hate lynn and pippa...no wait! huzzah! I abhor them! I mean, I guess they didn't do anything wrong wrong, but just, their presence? that sounds a little mean, is it a little mean? hm, well, just I like angela more, I suppose, by a lot. and the kiss! yay! but gah, she left cancer. tsk tsk, I might have to steal this darling kid away if she keeps leaving him, which I guess she has. scythe...ruining everything...I would grumble and such, but no one's around to hear it, so I suppose it's a little weird. whoosh, I'm getting really into this story, hehe.

Ah no.

Silly girl. Go with him, go with him, go with him.

I like Cancer :(

Scythe's a prick. A prickly, jerkish prick. He seems to use her whenever he wants, and she falls for it. Ahh, alas, the female mind is a complicated thing. Why we fall for the guys who cause us most harm, i will never know ...

Anyways, proper wicked update. I'm addicted to your work.

Awe I think Angela was jealous and upset over Lyn even if she can't admit it. Oh damn there goes Angela running to Scythe right away. I half expecte her to and really wanted and was hoping she would go off with Cancer. She needs to do something different. She could have at least called Scythe back and told him no and hung up. Besides he wasn't there for her after her boating accident. He doesn't always run to her she should be her own person more often.

Have I ever praised your talent? You've got this...thing for horror and suspense. I don't think I like Cancer anymore, but don't tell him that, I don't want to wake up in the middle of the night with his face pressed against my window. *shudders* As for Scythe...*runs and hugs, and tears off cackling*

hm this story is great, but there are parts i'm lost in, what exactly does scythe do that he thinks he would go to hell to...and why does he rely on angela so much. i think angela needs to try and stop helping her "best friend"

i'll come talk 2 u now. mwah.

What a wicked little kids. Drowning ants. I N-E-V-E-R drowned them. That's just too mean. I stuck fire crackers in their ant hills and then lit them. I bet the ant torturer is Rayth, isn't it? Scythe seems to petty to torture ants, he'd probably be more apt to torture cats. Or, is it Cancer, after all, his name is lionel and angela was acting like a lion, but I doubt it because she only met him like once when she was younger.

She wanted to be a vacuum cleaner? Man, who'd want to be a cleaning tool? That's like saying I want to be a duster. By any chance, is Angela like a neat freak? My mom's friend is one. It's crazy. -shivers- She combs her hair outside, and her brother is the same, only worse. He has to wear gloves to pet his cat, and like everything is covered in plastic.

Ooh, Her Ashes moment. Angela's shirt was drenched. Red, like wine. You and your wine. -laughs- 'Your shirt, it's stained.' Eire crazy right there.

“You still haven’t told me why you had that it your arm,” he cut me off. (I think you meant 'in your arm')

Ooh, is Lou the sister of Scythe? Did she die? I bet she did, maybe that's why Scythe's mom is so freaky. Are Scythe, Rayth, and the whole game planning on sacrificing Angela during a bones ceremony to bring back Lou? I doubt it. I still don't know who Lou is.

Everyone falls, eh? Trying to foreshadow something?

My my, I remember the predator using a lighter. Now Cancer is using a lighter. He can't be the predator because that wouldn't be hot. It would be mean. Rayth should be the predator.

Is that wierd boy that pops out of places cancer's brother, or is cancer an only child?

Dolly's gone missing because she's in one of those cages at Rayth's house. You also mentioned missing animals in a paper that angela threw out a few chapters back. Dolly's going to be a new participant in bones.

My mind's too crappy to make any more speculation. I'm probably wrong, but hey. Gosh, Rayth should get the girl even if he ends out to be psycho. Cancer isn't all that. No way. He's all wannabe Rayth, but there can only be one Rayth. The Original like original potato chips. Scythe would be the barbeque kind and cancer would be the salt and vinegar. Angela, she'd be like the pickle brand coz she's odd like that. Yup, your stori is like potato chips. And my bag of potato chips is empty, soz I need a refill.

Alright I must INSIST you update this story right now.

I'm obsessed with it basically.

argh...I'm too dumb for this story, it all goes over my head. You give us these evil little tiny clues-like shards of a dinner plate-they stick in others but not me. I should stop reading this story...but you temptress, seductress whatever the hell you are...leads me back to your godamn story.

Little boys? LIttle BoYs? Why?1 that's uncool to the top-hat,man. In every scary movie (6th sense, ring1 and 2, grudge 1 and 2, messengers, omen...etc!) I've seen, theres always a scary looking little boy. It's like...killer. Killer little boys and girls. Cancer is cancer. Dissolving my intestines as I write..0.o...ew...*sigh* he shouldn't be so hot.

I'd ask to borrow Cancer..but then I'd have to go to the hospital and stuff. Not cool. so I'll just...watch.

Angela...and boxes...and vaccums. Dude, vaccums? Ew. Hate those things. They're all loud and hatefilled with disgusting stuff. and it eats my friends,the dustbunnies..why oh why do they eat dustbunnies?

Why not...something warm and fuzzy? like...a brick wall?

Wow. just reread this review and realized I might be on crack, cause that cereal I had defintily had something else besides sugar

What keeps happening with the wood? And who was Pippa with? Also, don't you think you should explain a bit more about what Bones has to do with the predator and the rest?

Hello! Been a silent reader for quite a while now...decided to comment because i'm trying to be a smart alec P

Isn't Cancer *gasp* the predator!

LionelLionPREDATOR OMGWTFBBQ

-.-

Sorry. I love your story too much I got carried away XD

But don't the clues match? His obsession with hell and all...

'Welcome to hell.

-Predator.'

&he's justinterested (: *wink*

of course we know he's gonna fall in love with Angela and then a piano will magically appear in the middle of nowhere and they will start playing it in the rain, hold hands then run to the beach together, right, right right?

ilovetheangeldon'tkillher T.T

Dude, I totally worship your feetisies. Wicked story, I adore-ed the names :] Ori-gion-al.

So, I also read Catharis also but didn't review. If you want me to drop a hat for you I'm so there. Just say the word compadre. Catharis makes me think of City of Delusion by Muse-Bomb diggity fresh song- and Cancer makes me think of smoking and that reminds me of "The Mask". Ah, the wicked bomb movies of Jim Carrey. Anywho, your stories make me feel all warm and fuzzi-licious inside :]