I didn't even know this story updated! I'm happy now. But each chapter just gets eerier? weirder? only on chapter 10...hm, will wait for the answers to all be answered because I think I basically lost. Cancer dived in after her! I would say that he's jealous, but he barely treats Angela right, well I guess it's not bad, but he's pretty blase about everything. Everyone has their own issues, giving them, um, "quirks". I guess they're the quirks that get you caught up in them. Angela is feeling warm feelings in her stomach! is she liking cancer? I hope! Scythe is an attention whore, he has just like a presence, which does give him the attention he seeks. It's not a weird attentionish thing, but it's cute cause he reminds me of a little kid, well, one who's sexy. Cancer got even more fantastic in this chapter. I might have to steal him away if Angela doesn't start jumping him. All these boys around her, she has great resistance for not jumping on them and having her way with them. little boy. whenever the phrase litte boy, it always reminds me of those creepy ones in scary movies that are really scary considering how they were killing by something tragic, but then, they come back and attack and kill everyone. yah. huh. this is kinda long and dragging. overall, I love your story, yes yes.

my goodness, this story is amazing.

although i'm terribly confused.

haha.

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So I should definitely be going to sleep right now but this was too good, had to read it. Wow, Cancer is kind of messed up. That's sort of stalkerish. Awesome chapter.

its too to too mysterious in a sorta good way sorta bad way

any answers soon?

Kids in this story are so demented and disturbed...and I think that that's a wonderful thing because it adds to all the mystery, horrorness, and oddity of it all...its fascinating. Everything's so pretty in a morbid kind of way...

I like the portrayals of the characters...they're shown as how they are but i think that somehow it's still just a surface... Like you see them and know how they are but you still cant reach them because they are sort of walking contradictions and they switch from one 'them' to the other...or something

I love the screwed up personalities and interests though...

Is the little boy ever going to get a name?haha

Waiting for more Predator

-Ettenna

I could not possibly be any more confused than I am right now. SERIOUSLY. lol. I don't understand! *Whines*. It's not fair. Update! I want to understand SOMETHING. ARGH.

God, this is confusing!

Not the I-can't-make-sense-of-this-crap confusing but the ohmygod-can't-wait-to-see-what-this-is-all-about confusing, if you know what I mean.

Scythe was totally sweet in this chap, but this sweet-Scythe just spooks me out for no reason. Bleh.

I feel bad for Cancer. Ugh...HE SHOULD BE WITH ANGELA DAMNNIT!

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anyway, can't wait for more, Update?

“If I were you, I’d just get the bus. You never know what’s waiting for you in the water.” He let out a laugh, amused by his own joke.

Gawsh. And she fell. Everything that guy said was true.

That is so scary. so very scary. What about Rayth? She should've at least read them before she deleted them ;_;" Scythe and Rayth are so scary.

I love Cancer

Ooh, ooh, ooh. So the interaction with Cancer and Angela was nice; her crying on him...it was sweet but not in that corny-porny way. I like the metaphor in his story with the sunlight being her wings. I don't like his daddy. Poor Ang, accused of being Cancer's slut.

These flashbacks WILL be the death of me. Scythe was a weird little kid, drowning all the ants. And Angela was weird for saying they looked like submarines.

His excitement in this chapter was unnerving. Even without the freaky little boy, I would have suspected something bad to happen. I'm glad Cancer jumped after her. Awe...Speaking about that little boy, stalker. Knowing all that about Scythe, the water, etc. It was his doing.

I'm glad there was no Rayth in this chap.

The real question we're all wondering is who was cackling Pippa kissing? ;] NIce chap.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read. It's just, wow. You have amazing ideas and such a talent to act on them. Your writing is just breath taking. To a great extent.

ok this has feaked the living daylights out of me. and ur not even here to talk about it to stupid ho. im supposed 2 be doin the blake essay. ugh. but seriouslu wat is it it with the whole wood thing. and why can6t they just leave poor angie ALONE! god. im so depressed now. u suck.

I'm using chapter four review because I didn't use this box and forgot to say some things.

I wanted to know if the nightmare she had was a true memory?

I also wanted to say that the vacuum clearer coment was pretty damn funny. It makes me wonder if she was really being that naieve, or did know what could be meant from it but wasn't thinking about what she was saying.

Angela's so secretive ... after that boy threatened her again, which scared the pee out of me, by now if it were me I'd be mentioning something to someone. She freaked out over butterflies but is all like woo I keep getting threatened. I think I'll keep it to myself and see what happens.. Maybe next time the kis will get me instead of the bench.. lol mwah hah hah

Woah, this stories been intense. I am glad Cancer/Leon jumped into the water to get Angela. I was wondering what Scythe was thinking and if he would have jumped in to. I can't wait until the next chapter to see what happens, and if she will be forced to tell Scythe everything that's been going on. Plus if Raythe knows Leon does Scythe or doesn't he? Also if he did/does is he pretending not to. How does a boat just happen to collapse where she was sitting. I feel like it was plotted. Shudders. I didn't really understand the part about Pippa but I was guessing that the boy was the same one who was threatening Angela. This story is moving slowly towards the outcome and major happenings but it's the first time I don't mind, not really knowing what's going to happen next. It's written so well and so interesting that I couldn't stop reading it if someone had a gun to me. Ok maybe that's a little drastic but I do really like this story. Maybe you'll get to publish one day. Keep up the good work and update soon.

okay.

way too confusing

with the kid

and the cancer

and the scythe

and the scary raythe

and the .. confusion.

hopefully the end'll make sense...

but i'll always read the next chapter you put out...

because for some reason...it draws me in

and i try to figure it out..

it's like LOST.

that show is so full of secrets.

good chapter though, confusion as always, but good anyways

izzie

Oh. More suspense. :)

-Mellowdy