OOH. new character. This little boy is going to make things interesting i see. He knows whats going on. And i cant remember what my last theory was but now i think Scythe is the one trying to kill her. I dont think Scythe or Raythe are good people, i dont know their motives yet... but i trust cancer the most. I dont know why, but i definitly do.

How long do you think this story is going to be? About how many chapters?

I adore reading it!

well holy hanna. or should I say holey hanna. HAH. HAA. JUST HAHAAW. Cool me. so cool. so ridiculously cool.

or should i say holy hewert. or herbert. herbert's his name right?

this story is like baking bread. it rises. like my words of wisdom? Bet you’re all jealous now. I’m quickfastquick reviewy. The day you (I) update, the day I review. arent I faithful. haven’t I proved enough to you? Come on, let my ears hear the truth. -love- LOVE. -love-abc. Etc.

onwards.

scythe’s a little too close with those ants. it makes me uncomfortable. a little edgy, ya? I’m all, scythe stop making the ants drown, you get a little too excited, and scythe is all, “kelli SHUT UP holy moly grrl”. Like whoa! Pills! Pills!

I like how andrea cried on cancer. I like how cancer was all, “I’d hump you but I’d feel bad.” and I like his story. no I do. especially the part about sunlight being her wings, and he was all she don’t know how ta fly mate. it was a gooder. And how she walked downstairs and daddy dearest was all OH SLUT. and she went -hiccup- no.

see. cool events.

and then the little boy. creepy little boy. the little boy’s my new mate. he’s cool. I like him. at first I was like, “shoo” but now I’m all, “sit on my lap little boy”. HahaHAha, yeahh. Wicked mee.

I bet angela’s arm is going to dissolve in the water. no, seriously, it’s gonna be gone by the next chap. I’m looking forward to that.

and the coolest part was when the little boy was foretelling the events, like some fortune teller. and the water, ahha. Real shiny. loved that. and she was all BRUSH OFF. NO it’s a coincidence! Stupid gal. stupid. let’s call her stupid, naffzz. Let’s.

Can we.

can we.

Right now

okay.

scythe was freakishly talkative and nice, and he set up the boat going crunch. otherwise mr. Boy wouldn’t have warned her not to go with him. it could have been cancer too. well. them together. duh. But. BUT I DON’T KNOW. I take the “duh” back. I’m too stupid to use it.

it was fun-fun-funny when the boy stabbed the bench with the knife. like what the frig. he’s as crazy as you are. remember that time you stabbed me in the leg? that’s what that reminded me of. whew. good times.

and lynn. Random ass call there. jes randomzz.

She’s gonna die.

pippa should die.

she might have been kissing rayth though. so hum! ho! or tyson. Don’t know why. I’m just cool, throwing out names like that.

that predator ness is just. -conFOUNDed-

til next time. til the next amigoette!

ps; lOVEd this chap. mon. loved. -heart- do it again. do it. the update dance. go.

Why does it seem like all of a sudden they are having some sort of contest to see who can kill Angela first. I wish that this would start making some more sense... ahh, but it is ever so intriguing :)

okay, so i dunno what to think about the flash backs/forwards/present flashes...whatever the hell they are. though i definately think that one of them is cancer and another is steve (scythe). rayth is prolly involved too. maybe im wrong and just typing and not really thinking of what i really have to say. ah my poor twiggy fingers are starting to ache and strain due to the hard labor i am forcing upon them. oh woe is for my fingers! perhaps they shall tire and fall off, leaving me to be a fingerless being. Nay i shant think of such thoughts! for then i shall be known as..."No fingers"! (dun dun dun!)...yea. i had and episode there, well anywaym write more and clear up the italicized portions. the curiousity shall be the end of "No fingers"!

This has pretty much solidified my idea that little boys with knives are scary/creepy.

Also, that Pippa is a dirty, cheating slut.

And that everyone wants to make passionate out with Angela.

AND that the summary was derived from somwhere in the story. Also that it was derived from x3.

I'd hug scythe although I don't think he goes for that kinda thing. He seems quite...happy? in this chapter.

Congrast on your Catharsis nomination. I just voted!

hey sexy. hey. hey whats up. lets go for dinner tomorrow at 8. I’ll pick you up at our secret love spot.

I finally got my lazy ass into reviewing, eh. eh. I was going to earlier but guess what. I was like, can’t do it. no time. no chime. no slime. thats code for: “lazy”.

What’s up with rayth following her around from the shadows. what kind of creep is he? obviously the kind that stalks people in the shadows. but like wtf, naffi. Explain this to me in excruciatingly thorough detail. no I mean, every word counts. I demand it.

Can’t he be like every other boy on the street? can’t he just be good? can’t he hold her hand, give her a lolly, and stroll in the sun with her? Why the shadows. why.

a week—my oh my oh my oh MY. that’s a time gap and a half. naff tell us what happened in between. it’s like not telling us what’s in the middle of the sandwich. what if its beef? I’d sure as hell like to know. what if I originally thought it was tuna in the middle, and then HOLYSHH it’s beef. like, ouch.

So go on, now. tell us.

somebody took out the bat on scythe, didn’t they. they went WHACKSLAMNINJA on his punk ass. his scary punk ass. no scythe’s cool. I bet he’s the herbivore. oh wait there is no herbivore. the omnivore then. oh wait, har har. None of that either.

They’re all. . . (whisper) carnivores.

like raptors.

-rorr-

the newspaper. animals going missing INTO rayth’s creepy little greenhouse pethouse insecthouse. Wtf is it. a zoo.

Cancer’s a primate, up in the tree eating boonanas. he likes high places. he’s like. A KING. see, see. maybe then he’s leader man. nono it’s one of them boys (see im a genius).

“He peeled it. ‘Need a ride home?’ Bite.” I bet he bit her. no I just BET. $100 bucks, you and me. let’s do this dirty dance.

“‘No meaning you don’t want to do something lighter?’” softcore porn. oh mercy.

herbert. Forget about that. herbert for herbivore. HAWHAW. No I thought his name was hewey. No I didnt im jokin. Jes playin’, mon.

Anthony for ant eater. hahah man I’m good.

and that perverted note thangg (I JUST WANT TO TOUCHBREATHETASTE HER GOD MAN - predator) was a little intense for me. too intense. . . now I’ve been influenced darkly. by the powers of darkness.

the consumer has a bloody head. no he said so when he was flailing boxes to and fro.

that dayum lighter, nafeesah. It’s everywhere and NOWHERE at the same time. whoa, whoa.

“‘From now on, boys, things are going to move a lot faster.’” followed by a, “Let’s bounce!”. You forget that last bit. just letting you know

leon for LION. OH MAH GAWD. Well lionel and lion is kind of like, coo.

Cancer punched rayth, and I cheered. know why? Rayth’s dumb. and boring. well he was boring up until this chap. now I’d like to psychoanalyze the fate of the world because of him. why you ask? that’s a secret only for kelli.

so the bullies have rules, eh. eh. well aint that somethin’. Ain’t it.

I like how you describe the dried blood around rayth’s nostrils. it was sexy. I was like, damnn this story makes me hot. kay I lie, it was a little eck. I was like, no blood, no nostrils. im good.

dananandududnn. WAS scyth chilling out at the check up office, or was he swimming in EVILNESS. kickin at those crazy ass things. yknow whatever he was booting at angel. I can’t remember. well thats why im going through it again, naff. Stop yelling. stop it. STOP IT. KAY IM GOING ON.

Superman totally can’t morph through walls. can he. can he. inform me plz.

so like why does rayth decide to mention the weather? Is it foreshadowing that he will become a weatherman in the future? Is it? You can be honest. no lies now. nonee. Liars are losers.

happy birthday to rayth, happy birthday to rayth, happy birthday dear rayth, happy birthday to you.

Did you like that? Were you in awe of my sKiLlS. Hawhaw.

Aw mah gawd. Insects are gross, naffi. gross like you.

poor wittle angel got spookified by the butterflies. butterflies are awesome. except I don’t like the ones that look like they have eyes on their wings. they look like huge ass eyes and its like WTF IS THAT. and then it’s like, oh, mr butterfly. okay cool.

oh WOOD. the dude is chucking wood. I thought he was chucking the cages at first actually. so he’s hurtling huge planks of wood. I’ve got a funny image in my head of someone struggling with fat ass planks.

Oh there’s the cage. you can tell I’m writing this as I go. man oh man he sure likes to throw. is he in baseball? Perhaps softball? Perhaps CROQUET. oh wait silly me.

oh cuddling with cancer. you’d think he’d get the object out of her arm and hightail her to a hospital, but cancer’s not exactly usual. and plus he’s crazy. so yeah. so yeah, coo’. Co’.

And yes, angel. IT IS GOING TO SNOW. ra ra ra.

how’d you like my review? Was it good enough for you? I hope so, ‘cause I had to take a break in writing it. why? To watch veronica mars. but yeah.

rock on.

THE PLOT THICKENS LIKE OLD MILK! Rayth is so.. gaygaygaygay. He is the king of evillness. Or the prince. Scythe is the hotness. I bet, like, soon there will be this law where everyone in this story will have to call him "your hotness", because he's THAT hot. I don't like Lionel/Cancer. Or his little, grey haired brother who's probably the consumerorproducedorsomething. I mean, who has grey hair at THAT age? What could they possibly be worrying about? Nuclear war? Herpes? Syphillis? Tis all so confusing. And, I mean, what is Angel's DEAL? Staying out all night with boys and being all obsessed with Scythe but oh wait I like Cancer etcetc? I love her strangness because it's funneh but I hate her vagueness.

s. Please post the new chapter as soon as you can because I need to know what the Maddox is going on.

Why does Scythe's mother not like Angela? In elementary school, my best friend's mom didn't like me. Don't know what she had shoved up her butt. Everyone liked me. Not so much anymore, but that's how things go.

Rayth is starting to go all psycho on Angela. Aww, he's starting to like her. Oh yeah, I came up with an oh-so-brilliant theory. When you posted that wraith entry that had everybody wiggin, it was referring to Rayth because I did some ultra cool dictionary digging. There was no entry for Rayth, so it suggest Wraith instead.

Is someone planning to abduct Angela in the night time? Is that why they don't like her to be alone?

I'm still sticking by the whole:

ScythePredator

RaythProducer

&

CancerConsumer

Don't know why, but that's the way I like it. We obviously know who Angela is, the Angel/Prey, whatever you want to call her. Or maybe, you're being weird, so Rayth is the Angel/Prey and Angela is the Producer. How screwed up would that be.

What exactly does the Predator, Producer, and Consumer want? Hell, Cancer better not be the Predator. He seems to have some weird obsession with fire, and the Predator does too.

Why do they call Cancer Leon when his name is Lionel. Does he have multiple personalities? Like Sybil?

O, they're keeping animals in the cage. You know, the ones that they torture when they do bones. When are you going to reveal what bones actually is? It's kinda driving me mad.

Why does she care that it's not going to snow like Rayth said it would? He isn't exactly the weatherman unless he has some secret obsession for meteorology. -ponders- nah.

This review is way late, but I've finally got out of my lazy mode slightly. Oh yeah, I'm cursing you because I think I got your challenge for the ficathon. If it was number 10, then yep, I got it. I did the only sensible thing and counted down from the order people signed up.

AAH... This was a scarey chapter. I can't wait to find out why Cancer punched Raythe, and also who attacked Angela. If it was Raythe why, although I'm thinking it has to do with him being mad that she keeps leaving him.

If I was Angela I would go to the hospitol and the police.

Also how does Raythe know Cancer and if he knows him does Scythe know him too? I am starting to think that those three are the predator, consumer, and producer, and that they are all in on something. I'm so worried for Angela's saftey. Plus Cancer going on about Angela breaking the rules. You leave me with so many questions. I couldn't stop reading this story if I tried. It's definitely something I'd buy from the store for my book collection.

*squeals* this was awesome! I can't wait to see where this is going to end up! although Angel is kinda annoying at times, she's sort of hard to hate and you can't help loving her. I lurrve Cancer, and Scythe but I don't think I like Rayth, even before the wood-plank thing...he's just so...cold.

Anyway, can't wait for more, UPDATE!

CREEPOSITY. I knewknewKNEW Rayth was evil as I read this. Even his name is evil... Rayth. Or... Herbert. Ick. Evilness. My God, I'm so tired, no wondered this is coming across as strrange. Sorreh.

um. what? ray ray tried to kill ang? O_O

"(and daddy didn’t keep the right company and look at what happened to him"

It needs a ) and a . at the end. And don't you need to capitolize 'dad'?

(clutches head)

Eh. This is still so confusing. I've never been too good with enigmatic-ishness stories.

-Mellowdy

so confused.. but i love it )