i tell you everytime i review - the confusion sets in even more.

isn't cancer/lionel's dad rayth & scythe's driver?

i remember that from an earlier chapter..

anyways, more confusion...

but there's also that betrayal from Angel to Cancer and the fear of Rayth...which i sense has never happened before and that's kinda creepy.

again, all so confusing, but i'm willing to stick around.

i just need you to make me a promise:

if by the end of the story i still don't get it, can you explain it to me?

anyways, good chapter, i liked it, although i was confused.

izzie

ok so what just happened im kinda confuzzled.

yea he found the prezzie, after two freakin weaks. i tasted it and it tasted like...soap. w/an after taste of chocolate. k my mumsy's screaming at me to go pray so see ya.

it's a pity that you're going to be updating your collab more than this. in my opinion this story is about 100x better and deserves more of your attention than something about a girl babysitting a whackass little boy who eats a lot of cookies. plus it's frustrating to be reading a suspense/mystery type thing with slow updates. /

whew. how emotionally exhausting. seriously. and confusing.

it's sort of like cocaine, this story. (not that i have EVER done cocaine) first, you try it out becaus it's something mysterious, and new and exciting. then, you're all like: DUDE! that was weird, but awesome (in a completely weird way) i have to do it again. so you read another chapter and get even more into it's twistedness. you tell yourself you shouldn't do it because it's not good for you, because you get too wrapped up in it. but it's just too good NOT to do, right?

i have some interesting theories, but i shall not tell you. HA!

veryveryveryvery effing weird characters you have there.

personally, i like rayth the best. probably because it's his brother in the limelight.

like you said, this is complicated.

but i will figure it out...someday. until then i am going to stay addicted to the cocaine. kay?

peace

ohk. wth. that was beyond weird.

I cant remember exactly who flips the lighter, but i think its Scythe. So here is the deal. I think that Cancer is the consumer, Scythe is the producer and Rayth the predator.

I think that Raythe is really the dangerous one, the one who is planning this whole thing. I think he has some sort of leverage over Cancer and thats how he is keeping him a part of this plan. And I think he is keeping Scythe a part of this plan because Scythe wants Angela.. is in love with her and Raythe has promised him Angela. I dont know what Raythe wants exactly.. Angela for Himself, or to kill her so he can hurt Scythe... But either way it isn't good.

I think cancer is the safest because I think he is going to start to fall for Angela too... and since he only has leverage holding him as a part of the game he will forget whatever that leverage is to protect her. I dont think he knows how sinister Raythe really is yet.

Either that or its some sort of bet, who can get angela with them or something.. But i like my first idea better..

Of course by the next chapter you will reveal something that will totally debunk my theory... BUT I am loving it. PLEASE PLEASE update soon, like you did with this last chapter. You dont even understand how happy your story makes me!

LOVE IT!

holy shit. this story is really really good. and cancer is so hot. i want him for myself forever and ever. haha. UPDATE SOON! i LOVE how your chapters are so long, but it takes like, a month for you to update and it drives me very very nuts.

Ok, it's getting creepy again. . And yes, Scythe is my favorite simply because he's so unpredictable.

I'm so confused about the bones thing, but you're probably trying to keep it that way right? anyway this looks like a great story and I decided not to be a lurker so I'm posting a comment.

I like Angela. She has an innocent air and isn't obnoxious, crazy, and a complete enigma like Cancer and Scythe are.

I'm still a bit confused though. Not too much, but still puzzled nonetheless. And for some reason, your story is driving me paranoid. Iunno why..

But it's not like it's a bad thing. A little thrill now and then is good for the heart. ;)

Lionel is Cancer's real name, isn't it? (prods Hotkitty) Riight?

And who's that creepy guy with the knife? A mobster? A retro punk? What?

... Your not going to tell me, aren't you?

-Mellowdy

wait, they freakin KNOW each other? DUDE! Well he didn't ACT like he knew him. And dude, Cancer is such a freakin JERK. I would have left such a long time ago. Like right when he got on the bus I would have gone to MY stop and gotten off. JERK. And Scythe is definetely obsessed. They ALL seem a little obsessed tho. ha ha. well, update soon!

hi again. miss me? no you didnt you liar.

this chap was coo. i was like, why are you so cool? and the chap was like, "i dont really know, naffi made me that way. it might have something to do with the fact that cancer is super hot in this chap and scythe goes super weird but i dont really know."

so. i was like, "oh okay."

nice ants there. i had a long discussion about ants today. they're fucking weird. just so you know.

pspsps red ants SUCK SUCK SUCK

that wasnt really a ps, but more of a... POSEUR.

oh woe.

i liked how cancer was horny with angel's neck. i was all, "oo ahh" and "woo" and "aww" and "noice" and "HOHO" and you get the pictka.

speaking of which my hair is done and i can show you finally. finally.

it's cool how angel enjoyed being VIOLATED by cancer. hey that's like. a PUN. except she doesn't have cancer. cancer is a disease. he spreads his love. or his evilness.

oh and rayth is lonely. GOOD. no im not that mean. yes i am. shut up rayth. go eff pippa. pippa. peepa. peepoo. yokay. that was fun.

and ouch. getting the back of your head rammed by a door and then clashing teeth during a kiss, now that's what i call sushi.

yes that was the punch line.

the tree fire was cool. and dangerous. oh them silly thrill seekers.

i dont know why but i feel that the little boy (was he little..) who held the knife to angels throat was cancer's lil bro. i bet he's like... DIABETES. or ASTHMA. like me. my asthma. dont you ever think about me?

and jaheez rayth was dumb getting all piss potted over angel's absence. like she has a life, OKAY RAYTH. OKAY? i like telling off fictional characters. you've noticed i'm sure.

scythe was hot. all vulnerable and hot. -vulture- maybe... maybe I'M the predator. and it's a big twist cuz no one would ever suspect ME. a CAMEO. oh oh i have you figured out. -ego bursts-

hey didn't i review this chap. well here we are again.

tis better.

now we've got revenge.

she cleans yo basement on a saturday night with lots of lube.

i dont know what that means but it's pervy so.

so.

pervy.

pervy.

scuse me while i perv up your review bin.

no i won't, let's be serious. like this: srs.

cancer was like hot as a hotdog in this chap. i was like, oh yes, he's definitely edible. no he was hotter in the next chap but that would be looking into the future and i can't do that. seriously! no, don't take me to the authorities so they can poke and prod at my amazingness.

so what was with the axe.

cancer's a crazy mofo i tell ya.

i bet he hacks people to death for fun.

hack hack.

like that.

like this.

hack hack.

see. see. do you see?

the piano. the piano. the piano.

thats all i have to say about that. kay.

how cancer ducked under the table. OH WHAT A SUSPICIOUS LOSER. hiding from past lovers. -slap attack-

“You’re not in school,” the voice on the other end was silk. “Where are you?”

HE'S TALKING TO A SPIDER.

scythe is suspicious and crazy and evil and fuzzy.

he's also scary when he rams people into lockers. people such as.. dare i say. angel. ANGEL. anfngell.

"You look pretty.”

My fingers fell to my sleeve. “Thanks.”

HE WAS TALKING TO ME ANGEL. GOD. she's so self absorbed huh.

“Shut-up.” Scythe shoved her against the wall, and they proceeded to make out.

well okay. okay well. - no comment -

rayth is weird. for some reason i picture him as being fatter than scythe. dont ask me why. he... acts fatter?

no he's not as cool.

he's probably super evil, but he's just not. he's just. BLAH. he's got nothing on cancer or scyth.

cancer's so obviously a drama king. what with the fireworks. the crashboom KAPOO. and yeah. such a drama king.

all the predator dudes are messed up. messy messy heads. k onto chap 8 plzz wait for me there. i'll return to you. FATE WILL BRING US TOGETHER.

-deep delving-

So Scyth is capable of pain, Angela loves Cancer, Cancer seems to love her back, Rayth is in love with Angela, Rayth is appalled at Angela's coice of friends, and Lynn thinks she has an invitation to the ranks of the popular. Interesting.

o..so their's gonna be cancer/scythe drama?