I think Cancer’s definitely the Predator, but I think that the Consumer and the Producer aren’t either Scythe or Rayth. Maybe one of them is the boy who attacked Angela with the knife. I also think Cancer’s trying to get revenge on Scythe, Rayth, and their family, which has something to do with the lighthouse. Angela is involved in the revenge plot somehow because she’s close to Scythe, etc.

Sorry I got carried away. :)

I'm probably wrong.

I feel like a detective though, investigating your story like this. I'm going to shut up now.

UPDATE SOON!

Angela knows alot of weird people. I was totally frightened about the boy who held a knife to her, but I'm glad we now know Cancer's real name. Why does it seem all the boys drawn to Angela are strange and or violent. I was starting to freak out because I'm worried Angela is going to get hurt. Cancer pissed me off because yeah sure I think Scythe might like Angela, but you think he would know better than to be jealous or upset. Plus this last chapter makes it seem like God forbid if Angela isn't attached to Scythe's hip 24/7 and something happens she should be responsible to fix it. I was ticked that Rayth was mad at her. I also was a little nervous when Cancer called Angela Angel. ah I gotta get going, update soon..

and this only brought on more confusion...

not that i blame you

a good story is full of mystery and intrigue...

unless that's not what was intended.

but i'm starting to get there...

people are complicated and hard to understand,

example, rayth, scythe, cancer or is it leon or lionel or something?

like i said, the confusion is overwhelming me.

um..another thing i don't understand is the whole deal with Bones.

i'm assuming that the mystery of Bones adds to the intrigue of the story, because it sure as hell is confusing me.

i'm also VERY curious as to what happened at the party with scythe and the 'extra ritual'.

and with the words 'extra' and 'ritual' - i assume that Bones is not a boardgame they play in the woods, lol.

so, like usual, i am a very confused customer, but a customer who will always return because the mystery brings her back.

so there's still a reader in me.

izzie

ps - if you can, please try to explain everything by the end of the story.

I am so glad that you have updated. And those chapters were a master peice by the way. I am so overwhelemd with all the thoughts and emotions that they created that I cant even write them down for you. Sorry! I feel like im letting you down, because i always respond in depth...

But know that I am in love. IN love with your story in an insane way. It is by far the best short story i have read.

Please please please dont take so long to update? PLEASE?

You are amazing.I promise a better review next time.

i love love LOVE this story. it is so so so GOOD! please update soon!

ohmygod i just got flooded. haha. i just wanted to see the ant bit. & tell you it made my day. night. whatever. i _will_ read this. read-read. soon, i hope.

-kait

OK. So, you're writing is ever so good that I just ate almost an entire package of crackers because I was hella curious, yo.

And I'm not gonna lie, but I need to watch my shape. Because while, yes, round is a shape, it's not necessarily so mething that makes members of the sexier set want me in the way that Scythe, Cancer and now Rayth want Angela.

Which, when I think about it, just makes me want to have more crackers.

I'm not sure why though.

Probably because crackers are good.

M... crackers.

...

LIKED THE UPDATE AND YOU SHOULD DO IT MORE! YAY!

is that cancer at the end of each chapter? its good.. and confusing though. but updates?

ok so im not gettin the bones and ritual part. did u explain that already or did i just forget? Eid mubarak to u to man! my eid was ok. except for the part when my dad LOST my secret santa present! i got this chocolate flavored bath syrup thingy in an ice cream container and a cool coca cola t-shirt and he LOST IT! ah! i wanted to taste the soap and see if it actually tastes like chocolate. *sniffles* anyway, how was your Eid? well im happy that this chapter didnt end in a cliffy. thank god. ok so i like the soft needy side of Steve. but im starting to doubt his role as a bad guy. i like cancer or lionel (was that his name? i'll call him lion). though he's mysterious as well. eck. school starts tomorrow and i still have a homework and a million other things to do...like imagining the taste of my long lost bath syrup. sigh.

bones is a protection ritual, isn't it. and something happened and now scythes worried it wont work. and lionel huh? sounds a bit predatory. oo, ah.

im typing this with one hand. and how dare you go poof on msn. oh well oh well you're still in my heart.

i'll make a better review when i have two hands kay so expect me back to show you real lovin kk, kk, kk? peacee.

are scythe and them a part of a cult or something? all this balance and imbalance stuff w/ bones..

i dunno who's the good guy or bad guy (

can't help i love them all anyways...

*mouth hangs open with eyes popping out* (not a pretty sight)

What in the hey doodoo's going on? I can't stand the suspension, the mystery! *grabs heart* Mon coeur! Mon coeur! I'm slowly dying because of your evil cliffhanger. I need answers...I need more chapters! *falls to ground dramatically, a tear slids down my face* Hurry before it is to late! There is still time to save me! Quick send me a chapter to satisfy my poor greedy little heart. You could think of it as my early birthday gift which is in three months :)

"Goodbye cruel world. Alas, Hotkitty has shunned my pleas for help! Farewell Hotkitty. Farewell and adieu!" *dies dramatically*

*applause rings throughout*

*bows* "Thank you. Thank you. No need for applause, though my performance was quite outstanding. If I do say so myself."

Sorry, I got carried away again. I just loved that chapter. Simply perfection. That scence between Cancer and Angela in the diner, hot and smexy. Geeze, I had to pull out a fan just to cool me down.

P.S. Happy New Year! and please add more hot smexy scenes in your future chapters. :)

P.P.S I can't wait until you and bleedingair post your first chapter of whatever masterpiece you two are working on!

Creepy good, I guess. And because the alerts aren't working on FP I check all the author and story alerts on my lists each day. This just gets more and more interesting; the characters are each unique in his or her own way and contributes wonderfully. If I had to pick i'd say that Scythe is my fav.

i read yo reviews you weirdo.

that bluebook person is a really real deep seated analyzer aint he. gawd. that sucks. i dont like it when people analyze my story -scratches head. when they figgure it all out it makes me mad and change the whole story line. HAHAHHAA. but. that chick had some real good guesses mangg. she did. she just did. but she still sucks.

because its not fun when you guess the whole story.

& your a liar.

i'll tell you why when we cyber on msn the next time

HI NAFF.

im off to read your story now k.

just had to show you some lohv & stuff.

-flexes.

had to let you know im looking out for you

i am.

-snerk.

I REALLY AM.

k i wanna read now.

badly.

so im going to.

HEY

GUESS WHAT

CANCERS HOT.

awh angela is all skared now. shes going to cry now. no more perky, perky girl. hahah oh this is funny HAHAHAHA. listen. virgin angela liked it. HAHAHA '

-laughs at angela and at naff because she created angela and iman knows angela is really naff.

omfug.

RAYTH.

wouldnt it be like, so incredibly cool if RAYTH was the one who ended up with her in the end? oh please. please please please do that. i'll make you cinnamon rolls and shiat. we'll have a tea party. it'll be fun. no one would ever expect rayth&angela. ughghg. do it naff. do it.

this is like

a pretty intense chapter.

ee it was so cute and funfunfun.

cancer is funny.

i like cancer i think.

i do i do. i like raythe to. but not scythe. scythe is just too cliche for me.

-hairflip.

hahahahah awh.

i hope cancers jealous. i hope he is.

nafesa ur so sweet. look. you updated for me. i said to update faster and you did. for me wasnt it. WASNT IT. ohh naff im so happy. you do love me. you do you do.

FINALLY. You update. That makes me ubber happy. And this chapter makes me really happy. It was long. And fulfilling. Bones sounds like a creepy game. Cancer and Angela: that was hawt. Scythe and Angel: that was hot, too. So...was that guy who almost killed Angel (gasp) Cancer's biological/half/step brother? or something?

And Cancer's real name is Lionel/Leon. yay. Deja vu or something but I think I read that name somewhere in another chapter. I dunno. I'm dumb. Lionel: "lion". And lions are predators...huh? huh?

Never mind.

Adios.

And UPDATE