Reviews for Predator
Love Rhymes With chapter 24 . 10/5/2011
Oooh, such a fabulous story! I love how all the characters are unique. How they're not perfect. It seems like every story I read, the main person is never in the wrong. It's annoying. Angela was almost enigmatic.

I've been practically on the edge of my seat reading this story. I remember reading it years ago, before the ending was published. It's crazy how I remembered the story so well but this time reading it seemed so different. A good different :)

Anyway, I'd love to read more from you so please update Thieves of Samurett. I've been in the mood for some creepy romance and it has hit the spot...

Keep writing, my dear. You do a wonderful job.
tiltedHead chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
wow,this story has a really... interesting start.
frostyychicken chapter 24 . 7/12/2011
I have spent this whole day reading this story, and I'm really glad I did! This is a reallllyyyy gooodd story and you should consider publishing it! The plot was twisty-turvy and really captivating!

But I do have one question, did Scythe really have romantic feeling towards Angel? (you probably answered this question before, but I prolly skipped over it :D )

Keep writing, you're really good!

FrostytheChicken! (:
notamelody chapter 24 . 7/2/2011
Well... I finally got around to reading this. I had started it a long, long time ago, but, well, things happened and I couldn't read anymore of it. Yesterday, I had almost read the whole thing in one sitting, but I stopped in the middle of the 23rd chapter. Now, I'm finally finished. I have to say I'm rather upset that Scythe died, he was my favorite character. Rayth just freaked me out, and Cancer... Well, Cancer is a manipulative little sucker, isn't he? I've read Catharsis, and I'm thinking of reading it again, but I know this MUST go on my favorites list. I really wish you hadn't left, or, well, I'm guessing you left since you haven't written anything for a while. You're a great author with a lovely writing style that just seems to creep me out in a way that I love, if that makes any sense. I wish you could write more... (*cough*SequeltoCatharsis*cough*) But thank you for providing anyone with an internet connection this awesome story. I love your characters and your style. And your plots. And your... Nevermind, gonna stop now. But yeah, thanks.

Charlee Rayne chapter 24 . 6/7/2011
:O ... speechless...
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Very interesting :) I can't wait to read more!
Icsel chapter 24 . 5/15/2011
WOW , This is one of the best stories I have EVER read , You should get it published. I love your characters they are SO twisted and complicated especially Cancer though it was easy to figure out that he's the Predator. However ,

I don't understand the ending at all!I don't really understand Cancer's motives for revenge? why Angela?I don't get the connection between Angela and his ancestor and at the end does he actually feel anything for her or he still wants to kill her?.

Sadly...Angela really is my least favourite character, she annoys me SO much, how can she still trust Cancer? can't she feel that he's been lying to her?

I love how Cancer manipulated EVERYONE at the end!
Reeech Beeetch chapter 24 . 4/17/2011
Intriguing summary, and even more intriguing first few chapters. Read it in 2 days and here I am, quite unable to find the words to describe your manuscript.

It was rightfully chilling. Everyone in Angela’s world either was a psycho (the 3 guys) or didn’t really care (her mom and other non-existent friends). Creepy. Sad too. But riveting, totally riveting.

I thought, though, it would have been better in 3rd person POV. I felt Angela was merely recounting what was happening and not really giving deep thought to what was happening to her… unless she was so numb and did the first thing that popped into her head.

I’m unsure if I completely understand Cancer’s motives in preying on Angela, but I find myself not really caring. He is, hands down, the best character in your story. Cheers!
An unloved wing chapter 24 . 2/5/2011
I love how well-written and meaningful this story is, both compared to other stories on fictionpress and published novels. I also loved Angela. She was very relatable and even funny at times


Like a lot of other people I have a few questions. A lot really haha. It's mostly because I get confused really easily (especially when people jump around with points of view, so I'm not blaming you at all, I'm just kind of slow haha). My main question though (because I'm a hopeless romantic) is if Cancer developed feelings for Angela or if he intends to kill her?

Anyway, thank you for the compelling story. You really contributed to the quality of this site :)
Oliver23 chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I have to say this story intrigued me right off the bat which is rather difficult. If a story doesn't spark my interest in the first few paragraphs I normally leave. The first interactions reminded me of my friends when we were younger. Except I was the one who thought cursing was cool. _

The interactions between the characters are noticeably that of younger kids which I like. Sometimes it's difficult to tell but with yours I caught on quickly.

I found Cancer's legitimacy for his name ingenious as well. A large bravo to you on that.

Your style is very original and unique I look forward to finishing this story and reading more from you.

Liz Diz chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I am intrigued by the start up of your story. Your characters are very original and I have fallen in love with the design of them. There always seems to be someone we all know who thinks swearing is cool _ In reference to your character Scythe of course. I enjoy the bantering that goes on between your characters. Even for sounds like eight year old's in conversation.

I even found your characters a tad creepy.I found Cancer's name very completing for him. He is a disease so calling him Cancer was ingenious.

Angela appear innocent and sweet while your other characters tend to be more in the world.

I will continuing reading. I like your style a great deal. Good job. Keep up the good work.
Jaliy chapter 24 . 1/11/2011
This story was amazing. Lots of suspense and thrill.

Good job!

Ms Ocean Blue chapter 13 . 1/2/2011
I still cant figure out who kissed her:/
Ms Ocean Blue chapter 12 . 1/2/2011
Ms Ocean Blue chapter 11 . 1/2/2011
NO! She should have went with Cancer! No! Nevermind she did good that she went with Scythe! No, no no she didnt!

Look at what ur doing I cant even deceide between them,a nd whenever I read a story where 2 guys fall for a girl I either hate them both or just like one of them. This is the first time I have EVER liked both of them.
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