Reviews for Island Olivier |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD. It's over? *sniff* It was wonderful. I didn't review nearly as much as I should have. Feh. I loved this story. But then again, I love all of your stories. Blah, happy endings make me cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...I will admit, I read it practically all the way through before I thought of reviewing. Can you say addictive? I can. So sorry for the one measly review...but...well. I didn't see much in need of work, so there was nothing to remind me to review. I'll tell you the only thing I have a qualm with is Elizabeth. She seems pointless, her actions do...maybe a bit more explanation as to why, besides just a mean streak. Other than that... I love you how showed the language barrier and the issues it caused. Also, the gradual emergence of a relationship - not expressly romantic, but the trust aspect. And Rose Mary's constant indignance at Olivier's, erm, nighttime explorations were altogether amusing and great. The character development of Rose Mary and Olivier was amazing. Not so much with the others, Tana, Elizabeth, Joseph, etc, but that's easily explained by how rarely we see them. Overall, I really enjoyed this. So...thanks for writing it! -Arej |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh! this story's OVER? Ugh and i have my net to blame for not being able to follow the last three-four chapters! Sigh...so i enjoyed the story immensely and I love the romantic ending got me all thinking about... ...Right, anywho again, I'm glad I followed this story to the end and currently and jealous of you 'cause you've managed to finish a story while I'm still bogged down (chapter-fighting-me and finals but mainly chapter fighting me lol) so yeah...*throws flower petals for impending Rose Mary-Olivier's wedding* lol lol -MizSphinx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! So sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ugh Elizabeth is sucha a WHORE! but aww this was soo sweet, it almost makes me sad it's over. but alas it was time, and you ended it beautifully. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Words were a waste when they already knew the meaning." aw so sweet! |
![]() ![]() HOLY SNAP! That was amazing! I really, really love this. (Sorry I haven't been reviewing! I've been on vacation... heh.) Oh, and a super duper tiny something: when Romie writes her contact info down on the paper in (I think) chapter 10, you put "adress" instead of "address." Just so you know. ... And mostly because that was the only thing I could think of as "construcive criticism"... tee hee. Well, another triumph, my dear. Another triumph. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. I love it. Do you ever have the feeling when you read a fantastic book and you are so sad it ended? That is what I feel about this story! Please continue with your stories. You are a great writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Fab ending. Bravo lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved the happy ending. And also the whole thing about how they didn't have to use words to communicate [there's better ways ;)] |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay happy ending! Great chapter and nice ending. I loved this story. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Teehee :) Happy endings rock. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, I LIKE the ending cute haha, and i see my last review made you laugh again, haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect ending :D Though totally didn't see Liz coming.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sighs* Oh god, I really, really love sappy happyend-stories. will you write a sequel? |