This is funny. The story definitely got better after first chapter :D

I LOVE IT! THAT WAS B-E-A-U-TIFUL!

Oh, my George. AWESOME.

Absotutely LOVE it. Hilariousness shall ensue, I believe.

Oh, this is such a cute story! It was great and so funny. I loved that they spoke different languages and how they ended up.

i really liked this story and the fact that they spoke different languages which made it difficult for them to communicate with each other. i enjoyed it thoroughly, thank you.

beautiful!

I love this story. It's cheesy and cute and the happy ending was just adorable! LOVED it a lot. But your French needs some work :P

loved it!

ha ha i love the banter that goes on between them even though the language barrier makes it impossible for the other to know whats being said. its brilliantly funny.

its really funny especially the lines about appropriate way to flip the french woman off. ha ha i loved it.

haha! Awesome story. Realy, really nice! Had me laughing out loud, and omg Ollie is so gorgeous! They make an awesome couple!

AW

cutesy!

i really loved the symbolism in this story, and how words and language barriers didn't affect them

awesome as read :)

well done !

Aw...*sniffle sniffle* I really loved this story! Even though it was short, it was still absolutly AMAZING! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

-Bubbly Girl

Your ability to write about two leads who don't share the same language (quite fearless in my opinion) turned out very well, and not frustrating for me as a reader. I understand it's not helping their situation very much, but I only feel a shadow of that feeling through their actions, not towards the story. So, good job! I'm looking forward to reading more.