Reviews for Island Olivier |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aaw! ii must say ii really enjoyed reading your story it was fantastic & ii couldnt wish for a more beautiful ending :] MisCute.x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! I loved your story! It's amazing how you can write a male character who doesn't think and feel like a girl. There are few of those in this page, congratulations! |
![]() ![]() ![]() grr...i dont like lizzy. but i like this chapter a lot |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh, that is so funny about the rat. and its even better that you said your grandmother did that too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I absolutely, LOVED this story. It was hilarious at times and heart warming. No grammar or spelling mistakes, which makes for one smooth read, something you don't see often on this site. I enjoyed it thoroughly! thank you for the great read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it a lot :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! I LOVE IT! Best romance story ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, my LORD! I love this! This story is amazing if only for the sexy French dude! The French are irresistible. I love their accents. If they are French, they are almost automatically hot unless they have a glaring UNfabulous feature that registers on my HOT-dar as the size of a Humpback Whale, they are automatically hot. I LOVE the French! Okay, off the French note; your style of writing is fabulous, keep up the good work. A little creative criticism, try to add more action to your characters rather then dialog. Otherwise, it seems like their standing board still, just staring at each other as they talk. Watch spelling and grammar and you should be fine! Keep on writing, kill Oliver's girlfriend, and live fabulous! ~Lady Allaria~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome Story;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a wonderful read. I loved the ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww so sweet! I really enjoyed reading this! It was really good. Ara |
![]() ![]() aw, I liked that short sweet chapter - my heart was hurting for Ollie! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bravo! Bravo! Ancore! Sweetness! I loved it, unforchunetly it was a little short. But i still say it deserves a 7 out of 10. Thats very high on my list, most books dont make it past 5. Well, loved it, and continue writing your poetry of books! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWW! SO CUTE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a sweet ending :) |