Reviews for Island Olivier
Jeai chapter 12 . 9/7/2008
Aww. That was a really sweet story, I love it

Seriously, I cried by the end.
Birds and Boats chapter 12 . 8/29/2008
I really liked your story, except for the fact that you sorta rushed it, short and sweet though is perfectly okay. I think an reason for elizabeth's behaviour would've been better, like when she confessed to rose marie, she could've said "I was tired of chasing him when all he wanted was you, and i guess three years is punishment enough for setting up joseph with brielle." All in all, pretty good. I love how they both don;t speak the same language.
wistful-ambtions chapter 12 . 7/28/2008
aww such a cute story
Green Eyed Angel chapter 12 . 7/16/2008
Aww... It's such a sweet romance :D Like Robinson Crusoe, but ten times better. Because it has romance! Oh god, I love romance! greta story, btw. Love it!
Kyra chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Dear elisefey,

This feels strange, since I also have an FP account, but I'm not doing this for that, so logging in seems wrong somehow.

Besides the point:

Greetings from Some Kind Of Wonderful Romance Awards! One of your fans has nominated this story for the Most Humorous, Complete award on the Some Kind Of Wonderful website, and (somewhat belatedly) it's been accepted. This is just a forewarning.

If you wish you withdraw your nomination, please send an email to the given address and I'll contact my almost-boss (because I don't get paid for this XD) and she'll withdraw it for you. If you wish to keep the nomination standing, then you can check out the site and fetch for yourself a nomination button (kind of a cool little banner to display as a profile picture and stuff. I've got one for judge position, for example) and after the voting period you'll be informed of whether or not you won for your category/subcategory.

Other than that, this is a great story. The attitudes of the characters are much like that of people their age in real life-but I have to wonder, is the boat they're on the Fair Winds? It sounds as though they are (I actually live in Hawaii, so I like to think I know these things XD). If so, then you're doing a good job of passive, generic description.

Ahem. Anyhow, if nothing else, please keep up the good work.

- Kyra

Judge, SKoW Awards
SecretFeelings chapter 3 . 7/6/2008
omg. lol. at first i was like olivier? wtf is that? and then i remembered my friend's french name in french class(we have to pick different names in class for some reason. My real name is whitney but in french i'm called alice. if you dont write that name in on papers it gets thrown away) is olivier. XD everyone but the teacher calls him olive oil instead though.
rockjam chapter 12 . 7/4/2008
nice story. I'm a sucker for happy endings too. haha
christinaxxyo chapter 12 . 6/16/2008
The communication idea was awesome and although the ending was a tad cheesy, I liked it. Nice job :)
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
It's only the first chapter and I already adore Tana and Rose. You definitely had me hooked. The only thing that bugged me a bit was Olivier's section. It was informative but also a little boring. I still can't wait to find out more though! :)
a beginner chapter 12 . 6/8/2008
the summary was enough for me to go till the end... good one... :)
Jackie Ace chapter 5 . 5/27/2008

Cute chappie! XD
HelloLovely chapter 12 . 5/21/2008
AWH! I liked this one and it's originality. The ending was most definitely sweet. D


emilybh chapter 12 . 5/15/2008
Awh this was sweet :D
Cielesunshine chapter 8 . 4/24/2008
I'm rather enjoying readin this story! It's just the right amount of funny and your words seem to flow. I love how Olivier argues with himself, it reminds me of my French professor who defends his eccentricities by saying he's French! Sorry I can't really give you anything constructive to work on but this story is so greatly written. Thanks for reviewing BOTH of my stories by the way. Keep Writing! -Pheonix
Uniquely Proud chapter 12 . 4/22/2008
Hi! Great story. Definitely deserves the most humorous award. :)
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