|Reviews for Lies and Sorrow|
| criti-sized chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
This was a very expressive poem, and beautifully displayed. I only saw one typo, though, and it was very minor.
| Abby Sequioa chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
aw Jordyn I love it! *hug*
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
This is an emotional piece. It shows vulnerability yet strength. Excellent work, keep writing!
| Jeffro the Clown chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Woohoo she wrote something again! Holy moly! Yippee! Um...yeah! Keep writing and you better kick some butt today at the soccer game!