Reviews for Boyfriend
3DarkGoddess3 chapter 29 . 5/13/2009
The ending is still sad even if she was kinda ok with it. She needs a sequel.
1overE chapter 29 . 2/28/2008
Aw... personally, I think that was a good ending. It wouldn't have been... complete... I guess, if she had Shane... I like it this way. :)

Hotkitty chapter 29 . 6/26/2007
well. what to say... the ending's the obvious place to start. loved it & hated it at the same time. the love coming from the way that it all tied in completeli with the rest of the stori & was all...i dunno...logical? artistic, even. yeah. that's the word. it was all so prettili crafted & id go into a whole ton of arty jargon but then id end up sounding like some creep so i'll be all happi & simple. heh. hated it cuz it was sad (who doesnt hate sad endings?) & i wont say i wouldnt hav it any other way cuz psh, in my head, june & shane so got together like yeah... kinda like gone with the wind & the way that rhett & scarlett so got together the next morning day.


but i hearted the way that it was all so realistic. & tbf when i first randomli went through pplz profiles & found ur stori i thought itd be all typical & stuff cuz of the summari. & then the whole one guy & two girls thing but it realli wasnt. & i loved that about it. it was just so...real. & the emotions & the reactions & everything. it was all just there & nothing felt overdone. like the whole way that karen was actualli a person, if that makes any sense. like, she wasnt just the evil best friend, she actualli had feelings too. & then the way that june changed throughout & all that char progression. im a sucker for characterisation, so anything that has it is definiteli awesomeness & this had it:P

i also heart the way that so much'z been left unresolved, because, again, that's so realistic. the way that karen & june arent friends anymore & like... brad & jessica are no longer together. i wont say the way shane & june arent together cuz they so are together -deludes self- like yeah.

there was so much i wanted to say about this. but it's just totalli escaped my mind as im writing. heh... but i guess just... ireallirealli liked this. & i read it all in one go (something i havent done in forever) & i was totalli hooked. i dont think id be able to read the prequel, cuz it's one of those fics that leaves the lil panging in ur tummy, so u kant realli revisit the chars without it going pang a pang. heh. still wish that theyd had a happi ending but at the sme time i totalli get ur decision not to make it a happi ending, because it still fits with the overall realism of the stori.

hearted it like hell ;) id read more stuff but i need a bubble of happiness. so i'll probabli go watch anastacia (cuz u were dying to know that:P)

& uhm...ur an awesome writer :D i havent wrote a review in ages, so im sorri if i come off all weird sounding.
156 chapter 29 . 6/25/2007
OMFG, that was just mean... I'm crying now... I really hate this
EvangelineGoth chapter 29 . 5/30/2007
OMG, the story was nice and all, but my hearts ached when Shane and June didn't get together, I mean, June liked him so much, she liked him even before Karen did...Though good story since it didn't ended like others.
imsorandom chapter 30 . 5/22/2007
awesomeness! i can't wait for the prequel (loved the plot) and the other story...i'll be waiting!
fanficismything chapter 30 . 5/22/2007
YAY! I'll look forward to both of them!
fanficismything chapter 29 . 5/21/2007
NO! This is officially my favorate story on FictionPress! I personally think this was the best ending you could have made for it! I think the love triangle in her earlier years is a good idea. Thank you for writing such a good story!
imsorandom chapter 29 . 5/19/2007
woah, that was seriously amahzing! i LOVED the ending, the plot and every single thing about this story. although the ending wasn't exactly happy, it was fitting. a nice little sugary ending would've just looked forced. and shane was right, they had shared a lot of happy memories like all the parking lot/krepe's/History scenes...hehe...i loved those scenes. it's nice to see june was happy this chapter, as she does deserve some happiness. you should really do a sequel, despite what you said about it being boring, like shane and heather could break up and june could help shane move on...hey, it's possible! but the prequel thing sounds pretty good as well.

the best thing i liked about this story was that the characters, as much as they appeared perfect in the eyes of outsiders were actually really flawed. june appeared like the perfect girl-next-door but had to deal with the fact that she felt like nothing next to karen. karen could get any guy she wanted but was actually broken hearted inside and couldn't deal with rejection. hannah was a popular cheerleader who was actually lonely inside. even shane had to deal with his bad grades and the fact that he kept blaming things on everyone when it was all his fault. i also actually welcomed it when karen was all 'get-away-from-me-bitch' to june, as that was very real. if karen forgave june, that would've been very out of character.

okay, i'll stop going on and on but i just wanted to let you know how much i loved this story and i'll definitely be waiting for the prequel.
Tristanlover11 chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
I have to say, I really enjoyed reading this. You can really feel what June is feeling. I love how she feels so insecure up against Karen. The best stories are stories about actual people, who aren't the typical "pretty". Amazing, by far.

imsorandom chapter 28 . 5/8/2007
hate you? how could we hate you after such an amazing story. i loved every bit of it from karen's 'get-out-of-my-life-bitch' and trisha's ohmygod-your-life-is-hell to hannah's...well, whatever she said. it's nice to see june's moved on and i can't wait for the epilogue!

(this is 'blah' btw. i got an account)
fanficismything chapter 28 . 5/8/2007
Thanks for putting my review.. thingie... in your AN! And how could we hate you for the sotry? It's an awsome story and they DO need to start over with their lives so the can a a fresh beginning.
blah chapter 27 . 4/29/2007
i luved this chapter. especially the shane parts though it made me cry...i should really get a account...okay, that was random!
fanficismything chapter 27 . 4/29/2007
Poor June, but I feel for Shane and Karen too. They all need to get together and talk about what they felt.
Calisia girl chapter 27 . 4/29/2007
Yep, I embaressingly squel everytimne I get an email from fictionpress that there's another chapter out - and then don't even bother to review...

Shameful I know.

Anyway I hope you have something else on your mind when this is over - you're a great writer.
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