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Arf106 chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
You dwell on pain and strife a bit much, don't ya think? What about all of the memories that were happy and made you smile? I'm not saying that you have to write about them, I used to write so many poems on how hurt I was inside, because I thought I had a bad life, in truth I had an awesome life, wish I would've spent more time writing down the happy moments... Welp, I hope your life gets better!(Nice work by the way!).~Arf~
Taehl chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
Well, a poem like this needs at least one review to make the ending wrong. But I know what you're saying here. Keep in mind that it's the people's fault, not yours.