Reviews for Don't Tell Me
Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
Short, rebelious. I think the end should be "anyway" but, I don't really know. Perhaps it is some deeper meaning with the "s".
rira-chan chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
short and sweet. i loved it.


P.S haha yeah we are! _
The Ponderer chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
you really like short poems, don't you? well... i found this to be pretty straightforward, and i liked the bluntness of it... somehow, though, it feels like it's missing something... as though it's unfinished, in some way...
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
This feels extremely underdeveloped to me. These words seem like a thought you might right a poem about, not a poem themselves. Maybe this could be a line of a poem… but I don’t think it’s a very interesting poem on its own. In all honesty, as it is now, this piece is bland and unremarkable. If the idea were fleshed out, however, it might take on more meaning. I would be interested to see what you would come up with if you spent a little more time on this piece. Keep writing!