why the hell aren't you continuing this! :). this is fantastic for a start. a bit cliché the whole project thing but your writing style is really good.

your story idea IS very unique

please continue.

are you ever going to write more?

Wow Mez, sorry to say this, but sounds like a version of Romeo and Juliet. Anyway, try to make it a bit different from the plays, but once again, you have done a great job with descriptive stories. I look forward to the next chapter

Hey Angel,The girls relationship reminds me of us, even though I'm the devil and you practically the angel, but hey, this is a great story, I really enjoyed the first chapter, -six pack huh?- Who were you thinking of when writing this fic? Lol, so wanna know! Update asap, I'll call you... sometime or the other! Ha! Anyways, t/c!Dev ;)

wait, didnt she swallow her gum.

i am confused.

but interested