Reviews for of you
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
This is a lovely poem. My favorite part is this:

but the degree to which I fill my lungs

is a bit of breath I determine
emergency room romantic chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
the imagery, the format, the wording - all of this, absolutely gorgeous. simply beautiful. i love the way you write - all of it is amazing. this is no exception. an incredible, extremely powerful poem.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
hum. love it
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
This is a marvelously woven example of how language can capture so much more when it is placed with such a skilled hand. I like how you use the words to bounce off of each other and continue. Very well crafted. Good work.
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
This is so grammatically complex, but so full of insight! It's very different from what you usually write, in style I suppose, but there is some truly fantastic imagery "the song I sing within the convex bounds of my soul is an aria eternal written through my veins..." wow. dreamy :-). Even through the complexity of this, one can feel the ease with which you express yourself. Beautiful. Love, Mia
diffident chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
This is so soft a poem. Beautiful job. I love the metaphor of the first stanza.

marie