Reviews for A Sonnet to the Good Intentions that Lead to Hell |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yep, definately a sonnet. Nice use of old english there, somewhat Shakespearean even. There's a great use of vocabulary, imagery and even though sonnets are difficult you managed to pull off a decent rhythm with this one. It's good to reiterate over your character's past, it allows for reflection and gives yourself, if not other people, a deeper understanding of their mind. |
![]() ![]() all good intentions lead to hell everything leads to hell i think are already standing with one foot in hell for having been |
![]() ![]() was so very sceptical when saw title was expecting another "your all going to hell" fic.. BUT i am seriously glad i read this! (blame FCD, your on her fav.s list and I had nothin better to do, I can see why she likes your stuff) sos |
![]() ![]() ![]() despair, death, fear. WOOHOO. I LIKE IT! sos |
![]() ![]() the best part is your comments at the beginning and end! Awesome sonnet though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sonnets ALL AROUND! haha, this is good stuff. I like this one. Will another sonnet arise? |