Reviews for Brian's Dad
Kaysin chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
That was cute. I liked the pov, especially how you made it so we don't know anything about him. I'm assuming it's a him...it has a male feel, and he does have a girlfriend.
NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Nicely written. Dialogue flows smoothly and the description is wonderful. But is this person a male or female? I'm sort of confused, because he/she said they had a girlfriend, but then well...

anyway good job. keep it up.

lacy
SeaStones88 chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Is the main character a guy or girl?

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