the story of most kid's lives

always wanting to be just like the idolised older sibling

great piece of work!

I'm not too used to read poetry in english(I speak and write in french most of the time, I'm a 16years-old french canadian girl, yeah!), but I read and like a lot your poem, because it reminds me of how I something feel with my own older sister, and because it is well written!)

I loved this. This was written very well. I loved your ending. Well done.

~ Lacy