Reviews for can live without you
clownfishgirl chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
I love this poem... It's easy to relate to. The only line that threw me off was "we used to cry hardly". Do you mean hardly ever, or cry hardly as in crying a lot...? I'm thinking you meant the first, but maybe there's a way to clarify? Anyway, nice poem. The "chorus" is my favorite part. :)