Wow; this is incredible. i guess i understand...oh, never mind...nonetheless, it was a great story. i am so sorry for your loss. i think at some point we all have trouble holding on but i guess there are just some who think nothing will get any better and just decide to go on. this was really sad but incredibly well-written. Good job!

I suck at rhyming-I don't know...it's just hard for me...-but you make it look simple and easy and this poem is flawless! I'm impressed!

I can't wait to read more. I mean it!