Reviews for Santa's Little Helper |
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![]() ![]() You should really update this. I keep coming back every once in a while, but it's always on chapter 7. I really like this fic. Keep up the good work. PS, I like Max *Wiggles eyebrows* |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRILLIANT STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, update. It's amazing what you can find in your inbox. Anyways, good job, hope you update again soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chappy was nice, although a bit short. Ray... He's ok I guess... I didn't like Max hitting Ali though, I thought he was going to be, one of the few man to never hit her. And the gay issue was funny. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well... Haha, I can see how the bathtub thing might have bothered you, but remember it was a previously owned tiny horrid apartment, and at some point it wasn't horrid, just... tiny, and tiny could fit a bathtub, even if it perhaps, should have been a dirty, stinking, ugly, metal chipped kinda bathtub :) Keep it up :) |
![]() ![]() Whoa, did not see that one coming. great story. keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you came up with this while i was sleeping and you didn't tell me that THIS WAS GOING TO HAPPEN? ...and then she does him. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! i loved this chapter, haha ray is so gullible. hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! im so happy you updated cuz i really wanted to know what happened. I liked this chapter and agree, the bathtub is strangely scary P hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() eh! police! I need another chapter so please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this is really good so far. At first I was a bit doubtful, cos, you know, of the whole Max being 26 thing but yeah, it's really good. Hope you update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow amazing! loved it from the beginning but I was too obsessed with reading it to review before now. I love it and hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving it so far, if I had the time I would read more! Looking forward to the rest of this. ~Milee |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! So much! Max is so.. Charming :) Keep it up! Please! and Good work :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's good! And Damn! The football approach ahaha that was hillarious. On to chapter 4 :) |