Reviews for Faded Glory
kaylz chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
Hey.

I like the plot to your story but you kind of leave me hanging... WHATS GONNA HAPPEN! Sorry, I read stories like these and I want to know what happens right away. I hope you keep adding more things to it (the beginning is a little dry... but the middle is incredible).

Kaylz
twilight-x chapter 2 . 10/9/2006
Hmm... personally, I think squeezing so much excitement into only two chapters is a little forced. But I thought the Ask Alice column was super cute )
Milee Cola chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
This is going to be an interesting story! The development of Claire so far makes her easy to relate to, maybe some physical description so we know what she looks like would be handy? (or maybe I just didn't see it in there lol). Nicely written, i'm looking forward to more of the same. ~Milee
twilight-x chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
I can't really tell very much from the plot at this point, but I really like the character, Claire. She's very realistic and easy to relate to. The only thing is some of your grammar is a little off but I'm personally not too picky about that. I'd like to see where this story goes.