|Reviews for A Devil's Tear|
| Omnipotent-Mind chapter 28 . 3/22/2012
Great story so far. Aside from a few misspelled words your grammar is excellent. Good description and characters. The shadow and Alex especially. The beginning is a little slow, but in fantasy stories I kind of expect that. The only part of this story I didn't like, was the bus stop fight scene. The use of such an enormous cliche felt out of place with the flow of the story. This wasn't really a problem though, since your writing led me to believe you might have used a few. A great read, thanks for the opportunity.