Reviews for Would It Be?
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
I didn't find the repition necessary at all but I like the poem. It's a strong peice. I love when you put away in parenthesis. It added potency and emphasis
NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
nicely done.
SirScott chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
Somethings you just can't win.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
Hm. If this is to be a song, I think it needs to be just a touch longer. But that's just me...Thanks for reviewing my poem. And to reply to you...Yeah. I hope I'm okay too...Rowan