Reviews for Fallling Apart
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
citrus scented chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
I think the help in italics might really bring this out a bit, but it works well. simple yet sometimes they are the best.
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
I really love this one because it holds so much emotion.

Great Job!

Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
This is so short and bleak...but at the same time it's moving and intense..wonderful job of blending these emotions into something so powerful (albiet hopeless)...
rira-chan chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
i liked this one a lot too.

Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
Sometimes it helps to scream. Sometimes it helps to cry. I think sometimes it even helps to alternate.