Reviews for Metamorphosis
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
I really like this, cool imagery. I like the rhyming you used. This is my favorite part:

"I will become,/What you always wanted./My strings undone,/My end has started."

That's beautiful, I could practically hear this as a song in my head. I also like how you gave this poem an interesting first line, so the reader can get right into it.