Reviews for net
Femme de Dieu chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
This is somewhat chilling, and the progression you make from infancy to manhood was drew me forward to it's frustrated conclusion. The content is haunting, but the style is very good. I could see you inserting different phases of life in this as you go along. It reminds me somewhat of my "And Still She Grew..." only yours is more exasperating where mine is more melancholy. Again, our slight differences... )

(Take a peak back at Segue, if you will. I could not give up "face of grace," but I took your suggestion somewhat...) *humble smile*

Truly, Tourterelle
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
I liked the last verse the best. Great poem.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~
diffident chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
Quiet and mysterious. I really like this, actually. Good job. The rhyme was so fluid.