|Reviews for Honeysuckle|
| fairytale failure chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Beautiful and powerful in a few moments. Reminds me of when we used to pick honeysuckle and suck the juice out.../anyways. I like how it has a feeling of sad peace at the end. Well, really throughout the whole piece it is sadness and joy at the same time.
Paragraph 1, sentence 2 and paragraph 4, sentence 2 are fragments and not actual sentences. since this is almost prose poetry it is acceptable but you might want to think carefully about whether it would be more powerful if they were complete sentences.
| LlamaPhi chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
that's very sweet...
| psychedelicangel chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
Beautiful. It's amazing that such a small piece of writing can have such a big effect. You're a very talented writer!