Reviews for your name
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
Hmm. This isn't my favorite of yours, but it's still a angsty powerful poem. I like the line about "your name may be fading from skin." That image is just really strong to me. Keep writing! :)
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
this is really good, so heartfelt. the last line was amazing.

i love this style of writing, it appeals to me 'cos it seems straight from the heart without edit, like a bundle of thoughts and emotions - the way a poem should be. this reminds me very much of 'ten love letter's' work.

keep it up :]
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
i wish i could say something comforting...but i can't think of anything . i'm sorry for all of this. the pieces you write really makes an impact on me...