Reviews for Within your eyes
Femme de Dieu chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
This is gorgeous! The metaphors you use to describe the emotions in this person's eyes are superb. It's as if they speak a language all their own. I sometimes have to literally cover my eyes to keep people from knowing what I'm thinking. They "scream" my real thoughts. But the way you described this phenomenon is truly amazing and so ethereal and well...poetic! I loved this one. Off to read another one or two. (Still putting off my review of Shattered Glass...)

Truly, Tourterelle
Aelux chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
Wow, I wish I could see something like that in someones eyes. I have yet to meet someone with such a soul to have such eyes.

Great descriptions.

Btw, to answer your question, I am a guy. And if you want to chat on AIM or MSN or even YAHOO, I am always on, just so you know. If I don't respond, it's because i'm at school.

Anyway, great poem and I hope to see more.
Johnathen Braun chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
Very gorgeous. I loe this poem. It is going onto my favorites list! Muahahh!