Hokay so our Pundit ji has come out with another rather scrumptious romanitc plot, which I am excited but rather scared to read due to her inconsistent updates, but hey my reviews are inconsistent so its all good

any ways, well at the moment she seems like an older version of Chloe, but its only the first chapter

allrighty stud muffin update soon

not much to comment on, true, but I enjoyed how you started it.

Ou, I like it! I like Ethan and Bryn already.

And how do you pronounce 'Bryn'? Is it short for anything? I was just wondering. :]

Keep it up! :D

- Songs of the Heart

Wow! I definitely like the new story! Very interesting plot - can't wait till the next update )

It seems interesting and I want to see where it will go, but I'm missing DSR so I'm afraid that I have to beg for a DSR update and not AFD even though I want one... :) Hope that made some tiny bit of sense.

Fun, fun, fun.

But I hope it's not too predictable/cliche.

Work your magic.

Interesting plot!

Well, I'm certainly intrigued by the premise. Heh. I'll be watching out for the next chapter of this and DSR.

haha this sounds promising! :)

woot. another one of them girls in love with best friend idea. not that i find anything wrong with it. at all. seriously.

anyway, it sounds like a good start. though the date sounds a little rocky, good obstacle though. and the guy definitely sounds iffy. good job best friend. way to be. poker, psh. -

update DSR soon! - hahaha.

aww cute.

this blind date has hysterical possibilties.

steve goldberg is the every nerd who will end up a forty yr old virgin.

update!

I really really like it! Keep up the great work!

was cute!i liked itt!: )

HAHAHA wow... nice story whoopee! I'm excited about how this one will go. And since you are the author of Downward Spiral Rising, I know it can't be anything less than brilliant.

Curious... will anything important happen between Ethan and Bryn that can possibly change their relationship?

-anna