It is cute a good start, hey it got me interested. can;t wait to see how this plays out.

My own personal experience with blind dates wants to shake my head and yell don’t go. However I am hoping that it won't be that horrible, especially with a—um, how to put this delicately—an overweight, sexually repressed pervert... That was too funny! Hopefully he Goldberg showers. If not, Bryn has every right to give into the urge and punch Ethan. I loved the way Ethan just randomly tucked in a strand of her hair, that simplistic movement—though smacked away—was able to show their relationship with each other. That’s about it; I do hope this idea does not disappear.

I love your stories and can't wait for you to update all of them! xDANAx

I think its gr8 (you could have written more) but don't forget DSR and the cliffy.

I liked it, I didn't expect Goldberg to be that bad looking, but when you described him the way you did, I knew. Can't wait til the next installment.

this story sounds good. can't wait for the next chapter.

well i like it. (and you were right on not much to comment on yet) I don't really know what to say... This first chapter is really promising so unless the story takes a dive downhill (and believe me it would have to be a very big dive) i'll follow this.~dancrchick

Oh, interesting. very interesting. Do update soon, for both your stories. I'm a huge fan of Downward Spiral Rising :)

wow..im hooked after the first page! i like your writing style and the dramtic twists. Great job!

I don't mind it seems like a good start to a good story