Reviews for All Falls Down
sweetone0018 chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
It is cute a good start, hey it got me interested. can;t wait to see how this plays out.
cynically amused chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
My own personal experience with blind dates wants to shake my head and yell don’t go. However I am hoping that it won't be that horrible, especially with a—um, how to put this delicately—an overweight, sexually repressed pervert... That was too funny! Hopefully he Goldberg showers. If not, Bryn has every right to give into the urge and punch Ethan. I loved the way Ethan just randomly tucked in a strand of her hair, that simplistic movement—though smacked away—was able to show their relationship with each other. That’s about it; I do hope this idea does not disappear.
TheInvisiblePinkUnicorn chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
I love your stories and can't wait for you to update all of them! xDANAx
Ebonee chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
I think its gr8 (you could have written more) but don't forget DSR and the cliffy.
bluz chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
I liked it, I didn't expect Goldberg to be that bad looking, but when you described him the way you did, I knew. Can't wait til the next installment.
carina chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
this story sounds good. can't wait for the next chapter.
dancrchick chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
well i like it. (and you were right on not much to comment on yet) I don't really know what to say... This first chapter is really promising so unless the story takes a dive downhill (and believe me it would have to be a very big dive) i'll follow this.~dancrchick
cutebutpsycho27 chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
Oh, interesting. very interesting. Do update soon, for both your stories. I'm a huge fan of Downward Spiral Rising :)
bimbotrouble chapter 1 . 8/25/2006 hooked after the first page! i like your writing style and the dramtic twists. Great job!
Qryous chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
I don't mind it seems like a good start to a good story
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