Reviews for Return
SirScott chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
That was a sad song. I can see how you could work it into a story.

I wrote a short story inspired by a song. The Beautiful Meadow was inspired by Frankie Laine's song The Girl in the Wood.

SirScott
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
Aww, it's so sad... :(
Spirit Tigress chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
That was very sad.

I did like the story lost and found!

Review pesponse:

You'll find out why Ji-ku is the way he is in my next story: Chronicles of Darkness: Persecution and Exile.

Kiki and Kenji's relationship will start progressing a bit faster.
snowydawn chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
Very deep story. I like the emotional depth of it. Your a very good writer. The space between the each setence and its description is great. I also like the title. It sets the mood of the story. Keep up the good work!

SD
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
The emotional depth and complexity of this is heartwrenching. Very well developed and written. Great write.
WyrdWolf chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
Aw...this was touching. Plus, I listened to 'Return' as I read it. Doubly touching.

The integration of the story and lyrics was very cool and professionally done-of course, nothing short of what I've come to expect from your awesome poetry-story-ness. _ A fun read, and a fun fav!