Poor Bones. I quite liked this story - it's original and interesting. A change from other Christmas stories. I wonder about Bones, though. What is he? Imaginary friend? Ghost that can interact with the world?

Whatever he is, I feel sorry for him. It's terrible to feel left out on Christmas, of all days. You did a great job with this story. :)

Oh wow...powerful. I'm not sure I understand it totally though, because I'm getting the metaphor vibe (I so royally suck at metaphors) but then why can't Tracy see him for real? It's very well-written though. The characterization is wonderful.~Songbird

Wow cool! So... is he a ghost, or an imaginary friend or something? I figured I owed it to you to read some of your stuff, coz you were so enthusiastic about Dragon's Rebellion. I am not disappointed. apologies about the poor critique, i actually suck at it.

aww! poor bones, he seems so lonely and bitter! *hugs him*

Jessica it's such an awesome story! I love it! Can't wait for more! Oh, and by the way, UR ON THE WHITE TEAM! HAHAHAHAHAHAH!I'm sorry, that was totally un - called for. I apologise. Excellent story. Bravo.

Aw! Poor Bones! **So sad... and yet, it intrigues me.