Reviews for Welcome Back
AluminumMuse chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
I like the concept, but the rhymes sound rather forced. I think this could be just as powerful without them, and it would allow you to form some more powerful lines.
the theory of black chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
I really like this because, for me, I can see someone going to a loved ones funeral and they came back to school with that next level in their life.