Reviews for choke
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
aw i know the feeling. nice work.
water lily nymph chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
very intense formatting - tragic poetry in paragraphs; interesting to no end. hooray for being original. :)

ClearViewOfTheExit chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
I love poems like this. I love when you can use all five senses to really get into what the author is talking about. Your details are very nice. Thank you for sharing this.