Reviews for The Tear
wizkid08 chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
The way you put it up, is really powerful...since almost every line is just made up of one word, it gives the reader more time to visualize...and in result you want to read it again, and for writing this. :)
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
This is a marvelously constructed concept. Very philosophical in a way. Like hidden emotion drawn in the depths of someone looking at their interior feelings rather than their exterior expressions. Very thought provoking. Good write.