Wow I loved every chapter! I absolutely adored The way they struggled to admit their feelings. I just about fell over when Leigh used a clown pistol. I have to admit that my favorite part was the love admission on international television. I’m looking forward to seeing the other stories you wrote.

Never mind I just read the chapter I take back my comment

Thanks so much for this amazing story :)

they can finally get married!

I didn't write a review for each chapter like everyone else did but i like reading the whole thing before saying my voice which was, all in all. Very well written at first it was not as interesting as other books start out. But then chapter 6 happened. Omg, awesomeness. I wouldn't say that some chapters are better than others cause i don't look at that either Sooooooo very well done.

Well... I just read this story through and through in a day... And I must say I loved it !
As you said yourself, there are a couple of chapters a tiny bit not as good as the others, but in all, it is a very good story. You have a real nice writing style. And you manage quite well to surprise your readers. Even though I could smell the happy ending a mile away ;-)
Anyway, I enjoyed it immensely and will now proceed to read all you other works !
Thank you for posting on FP !

Found my way back for a re-read and utterly enjoyed it. Love your whole cast of characters.

Great story :)
I wished that they got married! Will there be a sequel? I wonder if they will have children hehe...

:D 3... nothing else needed

hello again! just wanted to say... i thought that having kevin leave during a crisis sort of makes him look like a dickhead... hahaha... still like him though..

absolutely loving this. going through this in one shot hahaha... btw near the end, where nick and jake are talking... "don't be so self-deprecating" "let's not ffight..." you might want to put something like... 'nick sighs...' between them so it's a bit more clear that it's the one person still talking.

loving it.. i'll be sure to review more if there are other thingies

... I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY! I found it on a yaoi list, thought that it might just be a good time waster, BUT NOOOOO this story has skyrocketed into my top three fictionpress stories of all time. Nick and Jake are so cute together... :3 The only thing that needs to be worked out is Alex... I need to know what happened to him. *sighs* But I are that this account is 'defunct'... If you happen to revisit your account here, just know that people love your stories! :)

Hi, I love your story. I been reading it straight non stop since the first chapter. However, this chapter made me sad. Mainly reason is the problem between nick and Jake. I have not read the next chapter so I don't know what will happen but the problem I had is with Alex. I understand that you introduced Alex to inform the audience that nick is in fact gay. In my opinion you use alex way more than you should. Two reason: the first one is you use him as a sexually object for nick to take the urge on. Even though they broke up and and in the story Alex was fine sleeping with nick but that is the story you made up. It's a lie. Lies to the audience and lies to Alex himself. Why? Because even if nick was my ex, I still have feeling for him as you stated when Alex asked nick that "...had a fight with your boyfriend..." Or something like that. Alex still care about nick. How do you feel when someone use you as a substitute for someone. It's hurt, Right?! Second reason, you introduce the negative aura for nick to the audience that he cheated on Jake. You even make the relationship between them even feel awkward by increasing the passionate love from Jake to nick but on the other hand take it like shit. This is a drama I can see that but this is a bad drama (my opinion). But to be honest you are very creative to turn the situation so I will read the next chapter and write what do I think. Thank you for writing this fiction.

Lov this

What a omg! She rly have godcomplex lol so sweet