|Reviews for Phoenix|
| Curlycurlz chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
This is quite beautiful. I think you're very talented, to be honest, and should publish an anthology one day.
| Femme de Dieu chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Alex, this is excellent. I can't see one thing I would change! I feel so attached to its sentiment as well. I must now go read the follow-up. ) Truly, Tourterelle, relever de deuil
| dustytiger chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
very good, i really enjoy your work a lot, this is exellent really, great job
as to your comment on punctuation, i've looked into how poetry should be punctuated and it says that it's optional, i personally think it's redundant, i assume that the "sentence" ends when i hit enter, it's a personal preference really but thanx for something consturctive in the review
| Coveredinblood11 chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
Nice...it flows together nicely.
| EnigmaticArsenic chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
i find this a little reminiscent of poe- probably because of its lyricism.