Reviews for Complacency
Counter Spiral chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
I really like this poem. It causes the reader to think about meanings, and I'm not sure whether you wrote it as a sincere wish or a satirical look at others, but either way it rings true. Very nice work. You should be proud of this one.
Heather Goldbug chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Wow! And believe me, I never say wow at a rhyming poem. But once again... wow!
Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 2/25/2003
I really like how you've constructed your meter, and line breaks for this poem. It drew me in, and compelled me to consider and reconsider the meaning of each line. You're strength here is in your emotional visuals. It takes a rare talent to create this.

Beautiful,

Lowell
Jessica Pinn chapter 1 . 8/14/2002
I really like that one. It was kind of a funny, sad. meaniful poem that was

short but ever so sweet. It had an a lot of emotional turmoil that made it

more realistic and enjoyable to read. It is as if you are opening up to those

you do not know. That takes a lot of courage. Keep on keeping on.

Jessica's Review: ***1/2
Jessica Pinn chapter 1 . 8/14/2002
I really like that one. It was kind of a funny, sad. meaniful poem that was

short but ever so sweet. It had an a lot of emotional turmoil that made it

more realistic and enjoyable to read. It is as if you are opening up to those

you do not know. That takes a lot of courage. Keep on keeping on.

Jessica's Review: ***1/2
Jessica Pinn chapter 1 . 8/14/2002
I really like that one. It was kind of a funny, sad. meaniful poem that was

short but ever so sweet. It had an a lot of emotional turmoil that made it

more realistic and enjoyable to read. It is as if you are opening up to those

you do not know. That takes a lot of courage. Keep on keeping on.

Jessica's Review: ***1/2
Jessica Pinn chapter 1 . 8/14/2002
I really like that one. It was kind of a funny, sad. meaniful poem that was

short but ever so sweet. It had an a lot of emotional turmoil that made it

more realistic and enjoyable to read. It is as if you are opening up to those

you do not know. That takes a lot of courage. Keep on keeping on.

Jessica's Review: ***1/2
Jessica Pinn chapter 1 . 8/14/2002
I really like that one. It was kind of a funny, sad. meaniful poem that was

short but ever so sweet. It had an a lot of emotional turmoil that made it

more realistic and enjoyable to read. It is as if you are opening up to those

you do not know. That takes a lot of courage. Keep on keeping on.

Jessica's Review: ***1/2
Jessica Pinn chapter 1 . 8/14/2002
I really like that one. It was kind of a funny, sad. meaniful poem that was

short but ever so sweet. It had an a lot of emotional turmoil that made it

more realistic and enjoyable to read. It is as if you are opening up to those

you do not know. That takes a lot of courage. Keep on keeping on.

Jessica's Review: ***1/2
Neesh chapter 1 . 4/14/2002
I understood

Not a word but it's good

And I don't get the message it sends

Right now I feel like rhyming

As the bells they are chiming

And this is all going on in my head.
Mystik-chan chapter 1 . 9/23/2001
there isn't an air of deppression that's usually there, but it's deppressing just the same
Lovely Waffles chapter 1 . 3/8/2001
I know the feeling. But time refuses to turn backwards, and forgetfulness is far from reach, eh?
SweetEvil chapter 1 . 3/8/2001
I live for depressing poems! I can relate to this one... I like it.