|Reviews for Dear Future Lover|
| Mystified chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
Heh. Another beaut. I'm starting to wonder just what it is exactly running around your head that prompts you to come up with these things. For instance: Don't be selfish. Hit the elderly.
I'm so going to have to remember that line. Spiffiness.
| xLilyx chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
lol, funny indeed! I liked the outlawing traffic lights and breaking for those pesky pedestrians...
| Sargent Pepper chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
Sorry, I don't like sushi or rice, but I enjoy a good resturant or a good home cooked meal. Do I still qualify? I like this and it can relate to alot of people. Take care, Joey
| MallowsWins chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
I'm suprised this got any bad reviews at all, I found it halarious. I love the line:
'He must always take his hamburgers with rice and complain when McDonald’s refuses to serve fine wine.'
If only! Anyway, I loved reading this, it was a great little ray of sunshine on an otherwise boring morning at work. Fantastic stuff.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
Hm. Cliche, this idea has been used many times. Over and over again. But I see you're for reviewing my
| give me back my childhood chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
hahaha interesting! (:
"If I have a certain fantasy about Peter Pan’s involvement in the holocaust, he, meaning you, must be willing to fulfill my requests."
funniest bit for me! haha! (:
| tad zendol chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
Thanks for the review.
I guess this was okay.
By the way, for you to know, most of the poems I put on here are written in a frenzy.
I'm having serious problems with my family right now, okay?
If you don't like it, fine, thanks for taking your time to review the five words that you did.
I honestly don't care.
Just, don't make this a... I don't know. Final impression.
I can write better when I try.d
| Universal Empire chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
Ha Ha Ha Ha...I liked this. Very funny!
Marilyn Manson is an excellant artist. I did change up the title and description and added an intro to explain what the real title is!
Very funny piece. Keep writing!Sadistikal
| loveshouldnthurt chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
i really like this and its goin in my faves! i like how its very different from other conventional poems and its funny!
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
hmm. pretty harsh review there. i apriciate your opinion and i'll take your words to heart to make my work better - but i just wrote this in the way i talk. poems are supposed to be feelings. and those were my feelings. don't hate me for it ;)
| Randomisation chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
wierd. i like it though!
| RAVEN-6666 chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
HA HA Very Cute, I liked it for what it is... keep writing. :)
| HitchSlap chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
Some of that's very fine humor and I think it'll go right over the head of a lot of people on fictionpress. But there are those of us who find it hilarious. (ex. "Don’t worry. My oven’s broken.") I love it.
You may have a knack for this; I'd like to see some more in the next few weeks.
Aren't they fun to write?