|Reviews for Captain|
| believe-in-futures chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
I am not sure if this is funny or not. I think that it is not.
I like the way you frame it with Cap'n Morgan (referring to the rum, yes?) That is a neat effect.
rock rock, float float - I don't like that part.
I like the last line very much as well.
| Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
Graphic, very inventive. I hope the lad accepted the blowjob before she puked.