Reviews for Empty Corner
Miharu Matsuko chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
EMOW. :))
On-My-Knees chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
*sigh* I just adore this poem! Not much more I can say besides that. But yea I love this piece!
lostladyknight chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Touching. This made me sad.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Interesting poem.

Twilight Starr
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Wow, so sad. Good work!

Kristie Marie
Basnirka amaterka chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
I liked the final surprise. I also appreciate the lack of pathos despite the bitter content.
BearHeart chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
I think that this poem is much more powerful than your others. It flows better, doesn't seem as contrived. Interesting concept. The ending lets it down a bit. "But it should have "happen" needs the "ed" ending. "it was only my imagination that I made in my corner" The word 'made' seems to me to be too generic. What about 'dreamed' or 'spun' or something more descriptive of what you actually were thinking. Keep up the good work.