I think I liked everything in this story, especially the clown (although I did feel bad about the timing of the first delivery, poor guy) and the ending.

Maria was my favorite.

The twist was good too.

loved the ending! omg now i'm even more afraid of clowns D:

Oh shit, that's creepy! O.O

There are no words for how fucking creepy that was.

Awesome. Dammit, now I'm going downstairs to make sure all my doors are locked.

The ending... is incredible. Kinda creepy though. Now I wonder if the characters are dead or not.

Wow, now I'm all paranoid and this someone's going to knock on my door and tell me I just ordered pizza.

CREPY!

FANTASTIC! The twist was incredible.. I was so engrossed in the characters (by the way, great job.. few people can write such human characters in such a short story) that I forgot about the weird clown pseudoactor.

Incredible job, I loved it!

Aw.. I love the ending!

It just conveys the feeling so well. Huhu.

I really want to see more of this (even though it's finished). Oh well.

Would love to see you write more even though you're probably really busy.

LAdidadida

haha, omg, that was just... so freaki. left me with a chill. at the start i didnt like it but i hearted your ending. "Fuck" haha e. & the main guy was hot. we.

loved it! especially the end. just- "fuck". e. get a flippin' bat out, haha.

i wonder how he knew they had ordered pizza in the first place.. before, anyhow. murderfy the real pizza boy & take over? lol.

all the charas were likeable. hayden was hot. woo. the part where erina got drunk was so cute.

i like how everything was really light-hearted, & then just, unexpectedly, the evil clown. haha. clowns ARE freaky lil things...