Reviews for Pied Piper
David Turner chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
This was an excelent story! It flowed very well and kept the readers attention the entire time. The atmosphere was definitely set, I completely felt the suspense of the soldier as the girl approached. I had some questions and suggestions but by the end the author tied up everything I was thinking while reading. There were a few typos, but other than that this was an amazing short story!
Mephistophelian chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
wow...very creepy. A lot of people seem to have trouble writing action, but from what I read here, you aren't one of them! I'm very intrested to see what becomes of Mr. Preston.

please update soon!