Reviews for Never Give Up
Sanity's Oubliette chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
I hate to say it, but this poem drags on and on with some less than effective repetition. However, it started well and you really have something here. Some of the lines are actually quite inspirational, and I really wish more people could get this message. I think you could cut it shorter and have it just as poignant - and don't give up. :)