Reviews for A Mortal War
Piroko Hatake chapter 26 . 8/18/2008
COOL! DEATH AND DESTRUCTION! I like how you killed Kelborn even though he was a good guy and possibly the only one that knew what the hell was going on. That was a nice twist. Me like!
Lyn-san chapter 8 . 12/15/2007
Hi, I just finished reading the first 8 chapters of your story and I am simply amazed at what I've read so far. I like how you developed your characters thus far, especially Andrew. I'm kinda worried about him right now because he injured... again and it seems as though he's in the clutches of the Inquisitors. Mou. Andrew...

I hope all goes well with him. Well, I'm off to the next chapter.

Ja-ne!

Lyn-san
Jumpin'JackFlash16 chapter 26 . 11/20/2006
A truly amazing action story, I can't wait for the sequel
Mystic Wolf Child chapter 26 . 10/31/2006
nice ending. i liked the reason that the war was going to contuie, but i did see where the story is going to go now . . .
Mystic Wolf Child chapter 24 . 10/30/2006
shoot, does that mean that ur almost done the story. i hope not. i like it and dont want it to end . . . i knew u would update again today. will u update again is the question? lol
Mystic Wolf Child chapter 23 . 10/30/2006
i knew that Jason was going to do that sooner or later. i hope that Erin is ok and will be better soon . . .

yay! updated!

update again soon! plz?
Mystic Wolf Child chapter 22 . 10/24/2006
cant wait to see what Tezok is up too. i hope that Jason will make his own wolf pack with him as the leader, that would be so cool!
Mystic Wolf Child chapter 21 . 10/23/2006
wow, great job . . .

i hope Jason doesnt die he is the last werewolf after all . . .
Mystic Wolf Child chapter 19 . 10/18/2006
wow, keep up the good work!
MoonlessAllure chapter 6 . 9/27/2006
I've really enjoyed your story so far; I love the plotline you're developing. Great characters.
Jumpin'JackFlash16 chapter 12 . 9/24/2006
good stuff, keep it coming
Mystic Wolf Child chapter 10 . 9/10/2006
if this was a real story in bookstores i wont buy it no matter what it cost. i love it!The werewolf is my fav, but i love vampires up the good work!
Jumpin'JackFlash16 chapter 10 . 9/6/2006
great story, lots of action and it seems like you researched the topics a bit, hope u update soon
Nikki Lee chapter 3 . 8/30/2006
Still enjoying your story. Keep the chapters comin'. :)
Nikki Lee chapter 2 . 8/29/2006
You've got a great start here. It's nicely written and well thought out-and interesting to boot. My mind is going crazy thinking of the twists and turns this story can take. I have a feeling that this is only going to get better and better. I'm awaiting the next chapter. :)
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